Hi True-elven ,

Being a TSCC fan , I have been reading allot of Fan fics .
I came across you story , as it was a favorite of another fan fic writer.
I really liked your story...very "Jameron" !!
It is too bad you didn't continue it , as it is really good work.
Your story telling is top notch , and you do a great job of fleshing out the characters.
John and Cam are both complex people, and I knew from the beginning of the show that Cameron would be of major importance in relation to John's well being and safety, as well as there is something else about her and her devotion to John.
I still think after seeing both Season 1 and 2 , Cameron and future John were very close, possibly a couple . This might have been because John was close to Allison too , and Cam looking like Allison was naturally chosen to be re-programmed .
Future John might have been heartbroken to have lost Allison, but , finding out Cam was not Allison , still wanted to keep her around as protection and a source of information about Skynet. From there I think Future John grew closer to Cam ,and Cam became more adapted to being human .
Maybe future John loved Allison like a sister, or daughter and thought that sending Cam back would help ensure his survival and possibly stop JD .
Your take on the Jameron side of TSCC was tastefully done .
I know John must be going nuts inside , especially being a teen
and being around a hot girl/scary robot . Cameron , on the other hand , well , she is a mystery .
I really do wish you would pic up where you left off and do more writing !!
Your story left me wanting more...2 chapters are just not enough . I would love to see more of this story and the angle it takes , or even a fresh story, but , still following along the Jameron angle.
Thank You for writing this !!

Amazing story please continue it and update soon.

Love this story. love the plot. please keep writing

Absolutely gorgeous story. The ending is so perfect and you keep them in character all the way through. I just can't believe there are gems like these in here. You are one amazing writer. Thank you for writing this.

that was fantastic. I love being inside John's head, feeling his inner conflict reguarding Cameron. More please.

Awesome story. Please continue!

Aw...I really hope you continue this. You really nailed the irony and humor within this intensely serious scenario. I definitely loved reading this. No OoC here. ^^

Now that was some good reading. Be awesome if you continued with this some day, but is great as it is.

Wonderful story!!:D please...update.

"WOW!"

That's like . . . Really, what else can I say about this story? Or maybe not so much the story, as your writing. You ever see someone do something you like doing, and think, "My God, I can't believe I ever thought I was good at that . . ."?

Because, quite honestly, besides the spontaneous "WOW!", it's all I thought about while reading these two chapters . . . I usually only read fanfics based on how many reviews they have, so they're almost always really, really good. But this . . . This is just on a whole other level than (quite possibly) ANY other story I've ever read. I just can't get over how masterful your writting is. Usually, it's the big walls of text between character dialogue that really slows the story down for me, but it was what made me want to keep going in this one. I mean -- MAN, I don't think I'm gonna be able to get over this for WEEKS! It might sound like I'm overexaggerating, but it was all just so good . . .

That moment after John re-inserts Cameron's Chip in "Vick's Chip" is the only real John/Cameron-ish moment we have so far (besides some possible minor stuff in the pilot), so it's always good to know that there's a story out there like this one to fulfill all my shipping needs. And -- My God, I just can't get over it!

Ugh, I better stop writing this review now, before I ramble on all night. >_>

Rating: PERFECT

To follow suit with stormyseas,

- You have very few grammatical errors, if you do have any.

- The way you let the story transcend from the start to the climax,and ending with the statement, "Just an ordinary boy," deserves an award.

- The way you write, from your use of adjectives, choice of words, and the way each paragraph itself is constructed, is exceptional.

I hope this helped. Update, please, this is the kind of fanfic I live on. And sorry to stormyseas77.

A triumph.

Good story...please update!

Now, this is the kind of story that is very much worth keep writing. Why, I must ask, why have you not done so ?

LOVED IT!