I know I'm late as always, but still, I feel the same way - NICE UPDATE. It was a very action-packed chapter, though I'm a bit sad that Basch and Ashe didn't meet (though that doesn't mean he won't go ballistic anymore for what she did, now, does it?) Ba'gamman was a bit of a surprise, but yeah, given the situation, they seemed to be the perfect villains. as always, i'm looking forward to the next chapter. more power!

Yey! Finalmente li. Clinfhanger! Pu. A Ashe realmente tem cá um feitiozinho... hehe. Fico á espera do proximo!

*Dikitas* (aka: melodia.da.noite)

Eari!

Wo-o-o-o-o-o-ow! What an awesome chapter!

It is so well written and exciting- I was on the edge of my chair! You are always such a master at painting the settings with your words. I felt like I was watching a scene in a movie. BRAVO.

The characters are perfect and O-hoh I can't wait for the next one!

xoxoxo

~Geo

Great job with this chapter! I must say, this is turning out to be my favorite stories of yours!

GAH! This chapter was quite intense! You can't just leave it there; I'm really excited about the next chapter now, haha...you seem to do that with all of your updates!

"“Well, because obviously I will steal it from you thereafter.”
Vaan didn’t like one bit Penelo’s chuckle after that comment from the older pirate. “You’re welcome to try,” was the young man’s only answer." - To me, that was absolutely hillarious, as was this one -

"“I daresay I saw her follow more than once, back then,” Balthier muttered to himself as he trailed his partner, “so if she follows knights, why can’t she follow a leading man for once? Seriously.”" :)

Great job and I can't wait for the next chapter~
~Liz

WARGGH!

I love it! It's awesome!

You'll totally love the triangle between Vaan, Larsa , and Penelo yes..but it sucks to be in the third point.*nods slowly*

Love the totally tangled Basch! He's so...tangly. XD

Well, I expect updates...WRITE!

*runs off to eat cookies*

AAH! You can’t leave it there!

Ah Eari…this chapter was, in two words epic win!

I could imagine it all in my head, like a TV episode! T’was awesome that!

Everyone was just so in character too! I could see them all saying that!

Vaan was win, heehee. I squealed at his comment to Ba’Gabby. Hee~! And his banter with Balthier was just hilarious, so them. And him jumping between Penelo and Bagboy , and his standing by Penelo, and the him holding her hand and EE~EE~EE!! EPIC LOVE WIN! 8D

I loved Ashe and Fran too. Ashe was just so…Ashe! Her anger at being called wench was awesome, I cheered at that.

And I loved the whole atmosphere of the town too! I actually read this without the music, and I already have quite a clear picture of what everything looks like and how all the character s move and E!

And dirty Balthier, trying to get a look at Ashe’s…ahemyhemhem. But it’s something he’d do, no denying that.

This chapter was a lovely surprise, I squealed when I saw you updated! It really made me day! And my day was already good! =D

~Feeny

Eari! You updated! What a wonderful sight to wake up to! Of course I read some previous chapters first and then finished this new one off straight away!

And it seems like you haven't really been away! I loved the escape from B'Gammie! And Balthier's comments are just so IC and very amusing! You can probably guess which was my favourite line of his! ;)

“I daresay I saw her follow more than once, back then,” Balthier muttered to himself as he trailed his partner, “so if she follows knights, why can’t she follow a leading man for once? Seriously.” Ek! XD

The scene with Vaan and Balthier bantering about finding the Cache was also very funny, but nicely done! And well, as for Penelo! Total girl power! New Knight indeed! I think Penny would make a great one!

There is so much in this that I loved, from your detail descriptions, to even the small bit on how Rinok seems to be the only one with a good nose!

But Fran going back to help Vaan and Penny was cool. (Balthier and Ashe on the Strahl? Eh! Nono keep them apart right?!) Though her spying of the small black ship in the aerodrome made me smile! Then of course the new voice calling out to her!! I can think of one person!

YAY! Basch! It has to be!

Thank you again Eari for this wonderful update! I loved reading every word of it! You are brilliant!

*Amy sits back and awaits for the next one!*

I'm very excited to see how the story proceeds! I'm loving the characters. :D

Bwahahaha. Finally i got to read this chapter. I love how Balthier has all his ammos ready and Ashe is just cramping his style. haha. And Larsa and the potions! HA! that brought back the memories. haha. I can't wait for the next chapter. And oh... I sense a Basch vs Balthier there somewhere. and and there are evil people that need to get their asses kicked. Haha. More power, and I hope to see more soon!

Once again, I loved the music! Haha, and the band from Star Wars totally fit with the whole scene in The Glossiar. Perfect!

Darn, no letter... oh well.

Haha, and Balthier oogling over Ashe. So typical of him, though her mysteriousness in that white cape must of had a huge sex appeal about it. lol XD

Good chapter, I did see some errors but hardly anything that would distract from being able to see the picture you create!

Keep it up!

~*~ landis icelilly ~*~

I liked the music with this chapter... it helped me 'feel' the story more. Hmm, I wonder why Ashe brought that list alone?

O, that note... gosh! I certainly hope there is a better time real soon for her to read that! LOL

I love Vaan's character in this, I think you write his character well, he is always opening his mouth at the wrong time and pushing things, whether in a good way or bad XD

Good job! On to the next chapter!

~*~ landis icelilly ~*~

O, an adventure! Wonder what's in store for them?

Woohoo! Basch made the list!! ... er... well kind of... Gabranth did but Gabranth... Basch... same thing! :D I'd be doing summersaults too if I had that hunk of a man to look forward to marrying!

Good chappie! Keep it up!

Getting late here so I'll read the next chapters again and review soon!!

~*~ landis icelilly ~*~
~*~ Kristi ~*~

Ok, I owe you some reviews! Hehe, I read this chapter on the fly just like the other but I wanted to leave you a good review not based on me having to remember what I read a couple weeks ago. So I read it back over again!

Hmm, Larsa's little mind works in such clever ways. Too clever for his own good I think :D I am curious to find out what his little costume will be! Same for Ashe and Basch... I wonder what they will wear?

I know this one was short but didn't lack in description, good job! On to the next chappie!!

~*~ Kristi ~*~

Adorava ter visto a cara do Basch quando o Larsa fez aquela pergunta, deve ser uma visão memorável.
Já agora vais por o resto da conversa? Gostava de saber as respostas dele. XP

E vi as imagens do Basch no teu profile...fiquei a olhar para elas um bom bocado, se ele já estava bom antes, ficou ainda melhor! Lol

E já agora, faz capitulos grandes à vontade! Adoro esta historia e por isso quanto maiores melhor!

Até à proxima!
*Melodia*

Oh Bagamnan! ^_^
He just wont bugger off will he?

Anyway, this is wonderfully written and a great joy to read. Cant wait for more -I hope you update soon! :D