That was a great story!

Nice work. Pity you didn't choose better lyrics though. :p

I loved it. Good job :)

I love that this sums up everything so many others write in a much smaller story. But it's beautifully written and incredibly sweet. Fantastic.

How sweet. Especially the end. Nice work :)

Aww!! so cute! i loved the way he comfort her! ^.^

aw.. it was good! ^-^

wow awesome...

I loved it how he didn't had to wait to long for her to be overwelmed by his appearance...