"Did a really good job on the last Zion bit, got himself promoted."

Scion, not Zion. Otherwise quite enjoyable!

Carry this on! What is it some kind of Atlantis story of Jesus? Carry this on! PLEASE!

huh.. this is weird. funny and cute. but still weird *grin*
sequel/another chapter to this? hmm... lol. love it:D!
*g*

Wow I love it!! Well written, fun, and just really good!! Well done!! Are you going to write more?

Will there be more, because this could get interesting.