 Red Death 2009-06-07 . chapter 1"Did a really good job on the last Zion bit, got himself promoted."
Scion, not Zion. Otherwise quite enjoyable! |
 Mrs Rosemary Weir 2009-02-25 . chapter 1Carry this on! What is it some kind of Atlantis story of Jesus? Carry this on! PLEASE! |
 ancientesha 2008-09-07 . chapter 1huh.. this is weird. funny and cute. but still weird *grin*
sequel/another chapter to this? hmm... lol. love it:D!
*g* |
 Charmed225 2008-02-10 . chapter 1Wow I love it!! Well written, fun, and just really good!! Well done!! Are you going to write more? |
 SG1SJSGAEJ 2008-02-10 . chapter 1Will there be more, because this could get interesting. |