Wow I always liked this fic very write very well and was very interesting to you very much for these stories, I finished them reading all in one night!

Yay for horror stories! And now i don't really want to go to sleep...

-Silvermoon

holy shit i think i pissed myself O_o so is Rogue going to come back to life like the others?

LOL she i will never do that O_o

SpOOktaciular!

wow you are good. i read this and i got chills. im never going to screw with bloody mary thats for sure. i think you are very good keep up the good work.

You have a lot of typos, granted you get better as the chapters go on, still just a read over before you post and spell check would get most of them.

If you like I have gone through and corrected most of your spelling and grammar mistakes, I tracked the changes in a word doc and can send it to you if you like. email: .

OMG! I would've fallen for that again! I'm telling you, Jean is AWESOME at not dying! I love when this updates. It's so much fun!

O.O

omg

that was scary...O.O scary!

EEP!

Very dramatic. Poor Kurt...

I like his accent, though. And your Logan.

I did notice several typos throughout here, especially with 'temperature.' But, editing it would probably fix that.

Have you ever thought about adding a little more character to your chapters? I like Kurt's teleportation, and it started me thinking that involving more of their powers in these could make them extremely interesting.

-eep- Don't these people know better than to stop at strange places in the middle of the night? Have they NEVER watched ANY movies in their entire lives?

I mean come on, there was creepy theme music playing that whole time and they still went in! :D

Um... Super yikes. Even, can be SO dumb sometimes.

I tried to PM you an answer to your question, but you don't have a message button on your site. But as far as an answer goes, I guess it's a little of both.

Sometimes the stories are a little too rushed, and the mental picture get's kind of lost when that happens.

Do you have a beta reader for this? Having someone to read it after you have can be a big help for these kinds of things.

Interesting... Though this one was way to short. It didn't seem quite beilieveable because it was over so quickly.

But it's still an interesting idea, and I think that having this one for Kitty was a good match.