O! That was really really good. It totally gave me the chills.

LOVE

Wow. That was beautiful. I can't tell you my favorite line, because I'd end up retyping the entire thing here. I read it through several times... The only thing is, shouldn't the 'my' in the first line be 'me'? Even so, pure talent right here.
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-The Stupid Crazy Insane Idiotic Weirdo known as Tassel630
-Please don't respond to this review-

wow... that was so pretty! ur really gifted not only at writing stories, but at poetry too ^-^

Wow. That was pretty darn good. I had to read it twice to fully understand it,which is good. I get a deeper meaning when I do that. Anyways, great job.
About Bitemarks and Bloodstains: just think of Edward in your head as a real person, who talks to you and gives you ideas. It sounds a little insane, but who cares. It's not as if you'll be speaking out loud to them.
Keep it up,
Resident Vampire

aw thats sweet i like it. if its not supposed to be sweet then oops oh well. i still like it.