 Mala 2008-02-16 . chapter 1This was really well done. There's not nearly enough slash in GH fandom and I quite liked your handling of Jerry/Devlin's dysfunctional relationship and the parallels between Jax's place in Jerry's life and Coop's. Only one big nitpick: The surname is spelled "Jacks," not "Jax," which is Jasper's nickname. |