This story you've started is very cute,I I q wqit the next chapter

i like it

This story is funny as heck, and sweet at the same time.

Ignore what other bad comments there are, cause the way you put this story is totally awesome. I cant wait for more.

I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE WRITTEN IT BUT I HAVE ONE THING FOR YOU. PLEASE DONT TALK ABOUT HIS PRIVTES AGAIN BECAUSE I FIND HUGELY DISDURBING. OH AND ONE MORE THING ARE THEY GOING TO BE MORE CHAPTERS?

Hedgehogs have spines not quils. Porcupines have quils. Quils come out, spines don't. I have a pet hedgehog i should know.

Lol, Poor Zap. X3
Cute!

but then later on she just can't take not knowing if she's using him for Sonic or not, but then Sonic shows up and either gets jealous or causes emotional conflict! XD

Sonic should definitely show up next chapter. And Metal/Zap should be all like, YOU! And try to strangle him! XD

lyke omg!
Plz continue soon! I needs to know what happens!

OH NOES! Zap! I mean, Metal! No wait..Zap...Metal?
Rawr so confuzzling!

Very good first two chapters! I can hardly wait until this really kicks off.

Great chapter, emotion and description. X3
I loved the way Zap's plans are beginning to formulate.

Yes! Yes! Finally! *seizure*

The only thing I can really think of to say about it right now is that I have a feeling everybody's favorite egg shaped man is gonna' be in a world of pain pretty soon. Hehehehehe.

wow! good! cant wait to read more!

Metal Sonic seems to be quite a favourite character with many fanfic authors. this sis a brilliant story so far my friend, but i do have 1 question. is Zap completely biological now or is he just flesh on the outside and wires and computer electronics on the inside? (just makes me wonder because if he is just flesh on the outside then how can he feel pain without a biological nervous system on the inside. thats all). anyway, i await the next chapter my friend and i'm adding this to my favourites. chow.

Kitsune.