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Taluliaka
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
I was muchly the excited when I realised Fox Ears had a sequel.
:D

Perfect characterisation once again. Bill has gone up several 'awesomes' in my 'awesome-o-meter', and I'm glad you brought him out of the minor characters place behind the shadow of Harry Potter. Who is a git.

And I love your Fred and George. I'm the sort that reads the seventh book and goes around feeling depressed that someone seperated the twins forever. So this is a great comfort to my weird soul.

And Fred's confessions to his brother in the second chapter are very sincere and give a little window into their world. I adore windows. :)

Keep writing,
Love Taluliaka
ncis-lady
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Wow I loved this one, the whole story of George and Charlie was so sad and I practically held my breath when Fred cut off his ear... But I think my fave part was Bill's conversation with Fleur when he is sitting at George's bedside. There were so many truths in his words, it really got to me. Can't wait to read the next part!
supersanj
2009-07-19 . chapter 2
Aw. This was brill. I was hooked on from beginning to end, and I yelled at my little cousin when he came and asked me what I was reading. I feel bad now. xD

But I loved it; it was so sweet, and I adore your writing. This was simply amazing.
FredWeasleyLivesOn
2009-07-11 . chapter 2
Ah

Thiis made me cry.. Ii Know iit shouldn''t .. .. .. but iit diid ! :P
Gandalf3213
2009-05-18 . chapter 2
Okay, this is one of my favorite HP fanfics (it might be my favorite, if you include the first one...Fox Ears, right?) I just...maybe I should mention I'm a twin. Twin brother, Mike, is currently asleep, 'cause he's a wuss...anyways, almost nobody writes the twins right. I can't write them right, they always turn out too angsty, or too happy, or too...something.

I think the best thing about these stories is that you really focused on Bill, Charlie, and the twins. Everyong (us included) likes to have ROn or Harry in these big-brother Weasley fics, and I believe that part of the charm of these stories is that you didn't go down that route.

BTW: Any chance of an update? I only ask because the last chapter was Fred and, which is misleading and a little mean if you don't update.

Yeah, we're being picky. But it really is an awesome story. Thanks for the great read.

Peace,
us
Silent Knight I
2009-04-18 . chapter 2
This is awesome. I was hooked from start to finish. It was such a coming of age story for Bill, even though the twins were central to the story. I adore the way you capture them all, you really have a strong understanding of their characters and how they interact, you could give JK a run for her money!
Bluefangluver
2009-03-01 . chapter 2
I laughed, I cried...I laughted somemore and I now have a new respect and understanind for twin bonds. I love your story. It was clear, well written, and It's nice the read a good brother fic...wonderful..
Jigglypuffer
2009-02-08 . chapter 2
D'aw, that was so sweet. I love Fred here. I don't have a twin, so I don't have a clue what it would be like to lose one, but I have to figure having the person you have literally known your entire life die would be crushing in the worst way. Gred and Forge forever!
Jigglypuffer
2009-02-08 . chapter 1
GAWD, I hate Umbridge. You wrote her so wonderfully horrible, though; just like the books. I'm glad she gets hers, though. I loved Bill in this as well. It's nice to see fanfiction focus on the elder Weasleys once in a while. Poor Bill, Charlie, and Percy never get fanfiction. Great job!
Kookies 'n Kreem
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
You MUST draw a picture of flaming bill at some time.

I MUST SEE THIS!

Your fictions are AMAZING

(thanks for re-Fredding me, I really needed that
haters make-me famous
2008-07-08 . chapter 2
Oh Where Do I Start. This Story Along With Fox Ears Made Me Cry Laugh And Much More. It Was A Very Well Written Story And I Feel You Portrayed Fred George Bill And Charlie Perfectly. This Is My New Alltime Favorite Story And Thats Saying Something Cuz I Have Read Damn Near Thousands. Lol Great Work!
Sweet Ginger Snap
2008-07-03 . chapter 1
I love you so very much.

Your writing is so impacting and meaningful... I cried and I laughed and I just loved everyone... and everything about this.

...excluding Umbridge, for understandable reasons, I'm sure. (But even her characterization was spot-on.)
NAth
2008-06-16 . chapter 2
The way you wrote out Fred's opinion of George really struck me as how he would be. I always had a suspicion that under it all Fred needed George more than George needed him. He always appeared to be the stronger twin, but it was the 'twinness' that made him so.

The part where he was telling George that he wanted George to have his ear back was so well written, and made me cry (more than DH was able to)
you have alot of talent, i hope you write more HPff.
Laura
2008-05-12 . chapter 2
I think your writing is fantastic - you really know the personality of each character, which makes your stories fit right in with JKR's books. I am so happy you wrote these, because I can finally believe that Fred is still alive :-D
Thank you! I hope there's more to come :-)
HPFanFictionFan
2008-05-01 . chapter 2
I love the twins. This chapter was really sweet. Well done! :)
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