Aww that was cute ^^

Very good again keep it up!

This is very well done keep it up ^^

You should really un-bold and un-center the chapter. I couldn't even take it seriously and get through it when it's formatted like this.

Not bad. Though I recommend taking off the bold typo when you write CH's.

And a little, just a little, more space to the sentences. Turning off the bold will keep from hurting people's eyes. It's not to discourage you but not everyone can tolerate that color for too long.

Other than that I'm very well interested to see how well this turns out and all.

UPDATE ASAP I LOVE JASON STORIEZ!

1) Don't f*cking bold the whole document.
2) Don't f*cking UNDERLINE the document.
3) Don't do BOTH.

I was too busy being blinded 'til my eyes bled to even know if this was a piece of sh*t story or not. Stop trying to stand out by f*cking up the story format with tools that are meant to emphasize only a couple of words in sentences/dialogue. It only proves to me that you're a d@mn newbie when you abuse the Bold and Underline tools like this.

Great chapter!! Hope you update soon...

I really like this story and I hope you update soon!!

lol thats funny how she said the tittle(or is that just me?)

I loved chapter 2 update asp because that was really good you should keep on writing this one because you have done a great job to far so keep up the great writing!

That was grate you should add on to this loved it keep it i am with you tell the every end of this story

that was beautiful especially the ending part when she said he wasnt a freak i bet that really touched jason