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| lily moonlight 2008-04-02 ch 1,  | abuseWow. You have a gift for distilling the the power of words. I can't pick a particular sentence, but the piece as a whole was so good. It has such an intensity. |
| LocoGreggo 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseAwesome job. This said it all. :-D *confetti* Made my day. |
| rainefan 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseYup, this is wonderful just as it is. Poetic and beautiful. |
| Elainhe 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThis one is like poetry. I cannot and won't ever write a Flack-story, but you are to blame for making me pay more and more attention to him. Loved this line: "They learned what was fair game for teasing (Devon and him), and what was still a trigger for tears (Frankie and her). They learned what could be discussed (his feelings for Angell) and what could not (her feelings for Mac). And somewhere in the middle of that van full of equipment, listening in on a gang of thugs and murderers, the things that might have stood between them dropped away, until there was little left but the truth." Where do you get all this from? |
| TatianaMik 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseIt stands alone great as it is. |
| marialisa 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseShort and intense. Only you could make Flack getting shot sexy! |
| Debavill 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseYou can write sweetie.. Your writing leaves me wanting more... This was very deep...Love it... |
| twinkeyrocks 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautifully written. I feel so inadequate when I read your fics. I love that you never tell us their names, but we know who they are. |
| foxdvd 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseWhenever I think I've finally figured out what makes one hell of a one shot you come out, seemingly out of nowhere, and show me that I know zilch and send me back to square one and the muse back to the drawing board... What was there to be discussed about Angell? |
| prplerayne 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuse*jumps up and down excitedly* I'm so glad you posted this! I love it the way it is! I especially like how you don't use their names but give us enough clues to figure out who it is!! Yay! *gigglesquee* Sorry, I'm hyped on caffeine and sugar already. |
| xdannyx 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abusehey that was good cant wait to read more |
| TessaStarDean 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI love it. I love how simple it is, and yet how deep. I just...love it. Great work. |
| CarolinaH.Manning 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abusewow, seriously. this was strong |
| mandy9578 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI love the whole underlying sexual tension in this story and how it got resolved. I particularly loved the last line - 'What the bullet failed to do – pierce his heart – she had done years ago with one casual glance.' How eloquently well-put. :) |
| ShannonG 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseWhat an awesome little story! I absolutely love it...and was thrilled to return from a whirlwind volleyball chaperoning weekend to find this in my inbox. :) |