That... was incredibly adorable. The last line was the best, in my opinion.)

Wow! What a sweet, well-planned, fabulously written, and touching story!

now, i don't particularily care about songs that go with chapters, but HOLY SHITTAKE!
i was listening to almost had you by bowling for soup (it was on repeat so it kept playing) while reading you fic (which is friggen awesome by the way) and the whole thing together worked so well!

now, back to the topic at hand. i hearted reading this story, it was not sugary or cute or anything like that (sometimes, sugary doesn't work), it had a sweet note to it and i don't kow how to describe it, but i really loved it!

hope you write more zemyx stuff, i'll like to see it!

Roxas-Has-A-Stick(and it's the cutest wittle stick on the planet)

Aw this was so cute. I was practically crying when Demyx slipped like he did. And I laughed when Zexion started rambling about leaving in the middle of the experiment and leaving all of his stuff in the middle of the yard and I loved the little bit about castrating Axel. That was funny. This was really cute and there were hardly no mistakes so that was good. I like your writing style. I can't wait to see what else you can do.