P.S yeah its Azi again. well don't tell yourself you suck cos you don't i think a lot of the stuff you've done is great. I read the 10 stories.)

ummmmmmmm... lol no um i think the age difference got to me I'm afraid sorry. and if she spent her whole life thinking he was her brother wouldn't it shock her a bit more than that sorry but thats what i thought.

I'm intrigued. Keep writing it and don't tell yourself you suck, cuz you don't. That cliff-hanger is evil, I wanna know what happens next! Metatron is my favourite character and good old AR is my favourite actor, too. Glad to see another who shares the same sentiments as me!

QUIT TELLING YOURSELF YOU SUCK! You're a good writer and come up with some very original ideas. I like this story so far, and can't wait to read more! )

This is a good beginning definitely keep going on this.