 Meatball42 2009-11-30 . chapter 5This was quite a pleasure to read! I loved them all, especially the first and third. Bu this last one really took the cake, because it was actually pretty believable. I love how you made Tony out to be this immature supercop, and Parsons was an interesting addition. Stan has piqued my curiosity, though! Surprisingly realistic and I love the end of the first chapter particularly, I can just see it! Love this fic! |
 Karfinwen 2009-11-11 . chapter 5the last one was freaking awesome. |
 mjg021182 2009-11-07 . chapter 5I really like this one too.
This one is probably the most likely of all of them, but I do love them all!!
Fabulous reading, loved it.
mj |
 mjg021182 2009-11-07 . chapter 4Interesting...
I think I like it.
mj |
 mjg021182 2009-11-07 . chapter 3No, I really like it!
Also, I forgot to mention in my review of last chapter, and FF won't let me post more than one review per chapter (!), but I totally loved the line about "This kid's gonna get the plague one day"! Hilarious.
mj |
 mjg021182 2009-11-07 . chapter 2Really love this one too!! Oh, you are so good!
mj |
 mjg021182 2009-11-07 . chapter 1This one is great. So in character too, love it. I can totally imagine this happening.
mj |
 CSnow 2009-11-03 . chapter 5These were pretty fun--I think I liked the last one the best, with Abby and Ducky giving their two cents on the 'newbie'.
:) |
 TheNightShadow4 2009-10-11 . chapter 5I liked all the other chapters, but this one seemed the most belieaveable. |
 Dybdahl 2009-09-05 . chapter 5Yeah!
I love the AUs and this was brilliant. |
 ShayaSar 2009-07-17 . chapter 5I adored the last one, that was perfect :) |
 Viktorija 2009-06-29 . chapter 5It was great!:) |
 Viktorija 2009-06-29 . chapter 4It was hilarious! |
 Viktorija 2009-06-29 . chapter 3It was interesting,lol:) |
 Viktorija 2009-06-29 . chapter 2lol,I liked it! |