 Noritsu 2008-03-30 . chapter 16That's right! He isn't just the groom! He's her knight in shining armor, her prince charming, her happily ever after, and by golly he needs to come up with a better (and more enthusiastic) answer than just "I think they're fine".
Especially if he ever wants to get out of that bridal shop with a few shreds of his sanity still intact! Actually, I think it was very brave of him (stupid, but brave) to even set foot in the place. He'll probably have nightmares tonight.
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 Noritsu 2008-03-30 . chapter 15Well, this was interesting. A view of Jack when he was little. Actually, it sounds more like Jack might have been a tad bit jealous. Mark got a girl, but he didn't.
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 Noritsu 2008-03-30 . chapter 14This was funny!
I like the 'it killed itself to be relieved of it's horribly fate' quote.
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 Noritsu 2008-03-30 . chapter 13I have no idea who James Blunt is, so you got me there. As for Coldplay, well I've heard of them but I don't know any of their songs. I do like U2, though.
This was a sad sort of prompt. I wonder if these two will ever get their act together with each other.
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 Noritsu 2008-03-29 . chapter 12Well, this highlights the 'what could have been' factor of the show. Just another scenario we'll probably be cheated out of by the writers. I swear, they must live to frustrate us.
It's a sweet scene on the surface, but I can empathize with how Jack is feeling. At least Claire's mom had enough sense to kick Christian out of her life. Too bad Jack's mom didn't do that as well. Of course, I don't think much of Jack's mom either.
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 Noritsu 2008-03-29 . chapter 11That was...very angsty...
Poor Jack. But, you know, he kinda has a point...
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 Noritsu 2008-03-29 . chapter 10You know, I had such high hopes for a Jack/Des friendship when they brought Des back onto the show. Don't get me wrong, I like Des with Charlie. But the first connection that was made, was with Desmond and they took that away. Of course, on the other hand, if they'd left Jack with Des, it might have been Jack that Des was having visions of dying. And that would have been very, very bad...
Anyway, it's nice to see a Jack/Des pairing. Good job!
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 Noritsu 2008-03-29 . chapter 9Oh, so sad!
I fear for what the writers are going to do to Jack when this is all set and done.
You got Jack's character good, in this. He's real good at helping other people, but he can't do a darn thing for himself.
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 Noritsu 2008-03-10 . chapter 8I just read Chap's 5-8.
Very nice!
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 hersheygal 2008-03-03 . chapter 8Very interesting. I bet Jack already was worrying right after they got married. Great job! |
 hersheygal 2008-03-03 . chapter 7loved it! |
 hersheygal 2008-03-03 . chapter 6Oh! So sad!! |
 hersheygal 2008-03-03 . chapter 5I just love your style of writing. It's amazing. |
 Noritsu 2008-02-22 . chapter 3Such angst! Poor Jack. Yes, he was really traumatized by that empty casket, wasn't he?
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 Noritsu 2008-02-22 . chapter 4Again, nice character study moment.
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