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Innocent KH
2008-06-19
ch 1,
abusehey! this story seems to be really good! cant wait for more.
but am curiuos... is this gonna be continued coz like u published it in february and we're in june!! =)
anyways, i love the part "leonhart is mine..touch him and i maim" lol! really funny =)
Nusku
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuse*snorts* poor Sora
Princess of Lies
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseGod, you guys HAVE to continue this! I'll die if you don't. Really, I will!
kestrel
2008-05-15
ch 1, anon.
abuse"Touch him and I maim" I love the personality you've given Cloud and what I've seen of the other characters. I'm really intrigued by this one. It was a good introductory chapter. I look forward to continuing the story.
Midnight Crisis
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseHah. Great. Poor Sora, though. Can't wait for the second chappie!
Valentined
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuseWhassis?
An australian fic?

Good thing I stumbled across it then.
Looks good so far. :]
Dead Bassline
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuseI don't know what to think of this yet, but it seems interesting... so yeah, I'm gonna follow it. Plus, you two are great writers so it's promising.

Update soon, please :)
Bittersweet flower
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuseAwesome! That's all there is to say :D did you take turns to write this chapter? Or do you write a chapter each? It's a great idea though, and I can't wait for the update
Peachie Bunni
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abuseYou have perked my interest. Axel and Roxas. Riku. Leon and Cloud :D Kairi and Aerith, YAY! I like the cast you've set. Now to see what your going to have them puppet. xD

Can't wait for the next update!
fullmetalguitar
2008-02-13
ch 1,
abuseDude, wtf is going on? *blinks* Where is he? What do they do? I'm so very confused... but I like it! It's all shiny and original looking. Love!
mochiusagi
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abusewow cloud sure is possesive, but its still adoarble of cloud though! please update soon!
Strawi
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuse"Leonhart is mine." Holy... save me.

You really got Sora there, just like in the game!! His personality I mean. And Demyx is there too, interesting. Even tough I don't understand what sort of job it is. Should I know? Just caught up on that with Aerith being a cook.

But anyway, I'm really looking forward to next chapter, keep it up!
FREAKSHOW1
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseWait wait wait. Hold up just a minute. What exactly does Sora have against KFC?
fullofmisery
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abuseOh! This looks good!
ComingTempest
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abuseI dont want to seem ignorant but... where does this take place? And what is a homestead? I feel like such a loser...
But this looks like a good fic! I like the "Leonhart is mine. Touch him and I maim" that line made me happy :)
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