im sorry to say this but this last chaptor made the story bad,i was expecting her to die,or move away,or something but your idea

I love this! Especially the Chowder referances!

so,is there going to be a chaptor 5 or what?

What the heck...? is this a Lazlo/Patsy story or a made up character with Lazlo story?

*Ignoring writer* huh? You say somethin'?

YEH! CHOWDER! GIMME SOME CHOWDER! (>'')>

Yeah! This is a wonderful start! Don't listen to that loser below my comment! Keep up the good work!

Wait... Lazlo likes Patsy? How'd have thought.