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| Secret Storywriter 2008-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW!! THAT WAS BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN!! Its an impressive plan, your writing was marvelous, i loved it! i just got a bit confused at the end para - but i think i know what you mean. also, when paul makes that "ladies and gentleman" joke, i think it wouldv'e been better if you had mentioned who had said, "SAy that again Holden." Thats all. Anyway, i enjoyed reading this - good job! Secret Storywriter **dont let anyone change you** |
| ronfanforever 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was great. I love Darry-centric fics. I've never read one from when he was younger though. I'd like to read a long one now. You connected the prank really well to a part of the real story. Nice work. |
| Flustered Vampire 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseSee! I did read! Did you get that idea from that MTV show about kids telling about thier pranks? Anywayz, I loved it! Thanks 4 the post, I'm still grounded so i'm comunicating from an outside location! - Flustered-san |
| JoVolle 2008-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat fic. Original and interesting and well written. Darry is so amazing and such a multi-layered character to write for... there's so much material there. You did a great job. I really enjoyed it. |