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Reviews For: Past Lives

Secret Storywriter
2008-06-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseWOW!! THAT WAS BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN!! Its an impressive plan, your writing was marvelous, i loved it!
i just got a bit confused at the end para - but i think i know what you mean. also, when paul makes that "ladies and gentleman" joke, i think it wouldv'e been better if you had mentioned who had said, "SAy that again Holden." Thats all.
Anyway, i enjoyed reading this - good job!

Secret Storywriter
**dont let anyone change you**
ronfanforever
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseThis was great. I love Darry-centric fics. I've never read one from when he was younger though. I'd like to read a long one now. You connected the prank really well to a part of the real story. Nice work.
Flustered Vampire
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseSee! I did read! Did you get that idea from that MTV show about kids telling about thier pranks? Anywayz, I loved it! Thanks 4 the post, I'm still grounded so i'm comunicating from an outside location! - Flustered-san
JoVolle
2008-02-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat fic. Original and interesting and well written.
Darry is so amazing and such a multi-layered character to write for... there's so much material there.
You did a great job. I really enjoyed it.
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