Very cool! I really love the relationship between Rin and Sesshomaru. I like the way you describe Rin's devotion and Sesshomaru's need to protect her. Very cute!

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This story was so sweet! grest job keeping sesshomaru in-character! i can just imagine this whole scene...

“There are more fireflies up the hill.”

I had to break into a smile when I read that.. that is exactly what I would have expected Sesshy-sama to say :D

Loved this story! You write brilliantly! Into my favourite it goes!

This was such a well-written and ridiculously endearing fic. Sesshomaru was definitely in-character, especially regarding his feelings (or lackthereof) toward Rin. Very sweet fic, and I really enjoyed reading.

This is written nicely. I like that you wrote it in first person point of view. I always wonder what Sesshoumaru is thinking and this give me a pretty good idea. Nice job!

it's brilliant
your excellent at writing
write more soon :)

Aw, Kawaii! I love this! ^^