 Coon 2009-07-30 . chapter 14 PLEASE continue this story! Please! Its too good to abandon.
The characters play their part well and everything just works.
And you're leaving me in suspence here! I loved this chapter! |
 olupotter18 2009-03-07 . chapter 14when u going to update on this fic |
 deathxofxthexbetrayed 2008-12-17 . chapter 14(Laughs) Draco has major homophobia! Harry is so cute here, too. The girls are really wicked to poor Hermione... she and Ron are going to get together, right? I love Luna's character too, even if her part so far has been small.
How's Draco going to react to Harry and Cedric? Hm... |
 Lavender.Fox 2008-12-06 . chapter 14OMG! How sweet is CedricHarry? I can't wait to see how Draco reacts! :D
Update soon! x3 |
 StarshineLove 2008-07-18 . chapter 14Oh shit.. it seems I'm hooked on this story. Damn it! Draco that bloody homophobe!! Damn.
Anyway, find inspiration soon and update. I rather like this story.. It's rather refreshing.. |
 Don't Riddle The Riddler 2008-07-11 . chapter 14Hey I really like the story so far, the plot is great and so are the characters. The thing I've noticed is that you seem to write more about Hermoine than any other character even though the story is supposed to be about Harry and Draco.
I know it's good to have other character interaction, but I think you're taking it a bit too far. Also, I haven't seen anything about Neville, and I thought it would be nice to see a bit of him.
Good luck. |
 katiesquilts 2008-07-11 . chapter 14LOL, I just about pressed the button, ready to rant on and on about tha drama in this chapter, and then I read the end note, where you spelled out "DRAMA" in big capital letters (yes, I need an example AND a description) so rather than copy-cat you, I shall just tell you that THIS CHAPTER WAS SO F-IN' AWESOME! Squee! I can't wait for the next one! ^^ Update soon! |
 red-headed psychopaths wanted 2008-06-22 . chapter 14O someone's jelous. XD |
 redrose-melody 2008-06-18 . chapter 14Dramma! Yeah!
So, is Draco angry at Harry because he lied to him or is he angry at Cedric because he's with Harry
Or does he hate them both because they're together^^
I can't wait to read the next update |
 evildictionaryninja 2008-06-17 . chapter 14Now i can't wait for the next chapter. I have to wonder what will happen: will they meet or will Draco jump ship before Harry notices (or so he thinks...)?
I wonder if anyone was in the schoolyard to notice Harry and Cedric?
Thanks for the update! |
 MoonlightPrincess 2008-06-17 . chapter 14Oh there goes the happy moment. Draco going to blow. |
 drarythoughts 2008-06-17 . chapter 14Oh No, I hope Draco doesn't blow it out of proportions and does something stupid, like sleeping with Pansy. Gosh, they got caught, but it wouldn't be dramatic if they didn't get caught. Poor Draco, he's jealous, I can totally tell. Awesome story, and update soon. Man, the next chapter is going to be drama-filled. Maybe next chapter you could have Draco ask Severus if he can quit tutoring Harry, and when Harry finds out he confronts Draco. That would be totally good! See ya later. |
 HyperMint 2008-06-16 . chapter 14You know, I have a feeling that Draco's going to look back on this and notice the first nibbles of jealousy.
Or I hope so, anyway.
Hyper |
 xXxDecemberxXxRainxXx 2008-06-16 . chapter 14*GASPS* OH NO! this will not end well... I really wanna know what happens! great story, and wonderful idea =] |
 GrlWithoutAName 2008-06-16 . chapter 14I knew it was coming soon! YEs!! I can't wait for the next chapter! |