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Reviews For: Me and You

Reptar Bars 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseI'm not trying to be a **, I swear, but a good writer should be able to write something amazing even if they don't like the content, don't you think? Now, with that said, it was decent. :/ Like, a 2.5/5 Keep writing, though; you seem like you'd be able to write some pretty amazing angst stuff. :]
TheBeautyOfTheGrave 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseaw, its really good, made me feel sad...but in a good way. Written well, good choice of song. I know u said you don't write slash but maybe you should. You're quite good at it! (Thats intended as a compliment btw, not an insult!) Holli xx
carnesfan 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseone word: great! i added it to the andrew/justin community.
murdered_inside 2008-03-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseThe fanfic is wonderful in the sense that it showed Andrew’s struggle to fight for what he felt despite the complications of the circumstances. I loved that you used the song from FOB (even if I actually hate the band). It explained the whole thing about “Hushed Love” using the right words. The story would be better if there was a bit of a “bad factor” to it. Anyway, take care.
carloslovesme 2008-02-14 ch 1, anon.	abusethis was a good fic. i think that you should extend it and turn it into a chapter fic.
dom :D 2008-02-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseas i've said, you seem carry the habit of writing sad stories. it's not a bad thing. could be your signature move? ;D anyways (fangiirl mode) yayerz!1! you wrote them!one! hurrah! i really do love you for that because these two boys make the world turn much faster xDD. it is nice to see a different side of andrew every now and then :)
Mad Red Queen 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseWhy would you rather copy/paste the lyrics to a damn song for, basically, the whole story rather than attempt to write more of an actual FANFICTION? I'm not against songfics, but a whole story comprised of song lyrics and a paragraph or two of original writing is just... terrible. Get your act stright, because even though I'm not against some songfics, the site tends to frown on them. Also, Fallout Boy? C'mon, that ranks right up there at "totly Htt" for emo fangirlies along with Evanescence and Linkin Park. At least TRY to be creative. Oh, wait, I forgot about Panic! At The Disco... sigh... can't forget about them, now, can I? Also, the emo undertones are less than original and 5-star worthy, but I'll give you this- for the (for the most part) good grammar and not a stick-a-fork-down-my-throat bad use of the written English language in this fic, I'm grateful.
SommerDieFleur 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abusenice one, pare! :) keep it up :D

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