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Reviews for: Just You Wait
x-SwiftyGirl-x 4/23/10 . chapter 1
Another nice dark Farla fic, as usual. Another angry pokemon being abused by its trainer... As usual. Good like always, but it's the same story you've been telling us for a while now. Wrote more! With new ideas next time!)
Captain Wolf 11/12/06 . chapter 1
Straight and to the point, but I like it. I'd like to see the look on that trainer's face when the pokemon evolves. I like this one because the pokemon's standing up for there self and aren't just reflecting on what a crappy life they have. And look, wow, I've managed to make this review long even though it was only a less-than-one-hundred-word story, or poem, sorry. I liked it. Notice how I'm trying to say something different than "nice job", but the fact that I liked it really means the same thing. And now I am so overly digressing, so yeah, I'll stop talking.-spiritwolf101-
Redemmo 10/29/04 . chapter 1
slightly different storyline but it's too short to say much mre about it. sorry.
Jailbirdy 8/27/04 . chapter 1
...it's... a little generic.

Sort of old news. Unhappy pokemon, abusive trainer, when it evolves it takes out it's trainer's throat. The end. Except here that last it is just implied.
Jay-Chan3 4/16/03 . chapter 1
you... are... amazing! Short but sweet, maximum character with minimum lines. Your poetry is incredible, write more_!
Jessiekat 3/18/02 . chapter 1
Cool! *claps* Farla: the Best Angst Writer in da World! :D:D _
Lunamew 1/14/02 . chapter 1
short and to the point. rather nice.
Sailor Koo 10/11/01 . chapter 1
what pokemon?
Seir 9/20/01 . chapter 1
You don't need to know, you're great !
Darkness Master 9/19/01 . chapter 1
It's not an aspect we usually think of...the dark stuff. But you're good.
Dawn Allies 9/19/01 . chapter 1
Just as happy as ever! I always like your poem/stories so I'm gonna like this one to. And of course I do!
Wildwolf 9/18/01 . chapter 1
Yeah, maybe it's better not to ask some stuff. Life punishes those who delve into its mysteries. I like your poetry. Write more...
KissDarkness 9/17/01 . chapter 1
Cool. Of course, with me in this happy jolly mood I'm in, I'm reading this with a happy jolly voice in my head, so the anger part of it doesn't really have much of a effect/affect(WHICH ONE?) on me. Peace!
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