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ziggy.uk 9/26/11 . chapter 1
Great story, never really thought before on how they got back to the Impala! Loved the conversation between the boys in the car, it really made the fic, talking about old hunts and then the one that Sam had read about in their dad's journal, and the banter too was perfect.
Illucida 10/13/10 . chapter 1
:D Very fun.
BlueSea14 1/5/09 . chapter 1
I liked this one-it was funny to read of Dean ragging on the other car. Nothing will ever be as good as his Impala.
One thing that I noticed which was slightly odd was this
and even though the Impala was waiting only…” Sam glanced at the mileage, “…about 150 miles away

This was noticeable to me because of the quotation marks. I would think that a dash would be better, so that it went
and even though the Impala was waiting only-Sam glanced at the mileage-about 150 miles away

Just a suggestion. :D

Good job!
Nana56 10/12/08 . chapter 1
Time in the car together, even if it's not the Impala! Gives them plenty to talk about. Still getting reacquainted and figuring out who they've become.

Great fic!
luvjase 8/28/08 . chapter 1
Okay so I started out laughing with this one and ended up laughing, but the middle... Loved Sam's sudden realization that it was the idea of no control on the plane, and while Sam was away at Stanford, that was what really bothered Dean. And of course the real reason Dean got on that plane was to watch his brother's back. Dean's perception of Sam's thoughts was perfect. Again I love how you have the boys wanting to learn whatever they could about their time apart. I also love that you stick to the 3-4 year college gap. Never doubted that the creatures you write about could be found out there just didn't realize so many were ugy! Oh, and a trucker with a Hello Kitty obsession now that's something to be scared of! And my favorite band is AC/DC so thanks for that too! Once again another awesome chapter in the lives of Sam and Dean. Thanks!
zookitty 6/6/08 . chapter 1
This reminds me of a great line frm Without A trace, Danny is afraid of airplanes too. Danny: All I'm saying is planes are unnatural. Martin: Yeah well the stuartess was unnatural too and you weren't afraid of her. (LOL
Love this scene. Dean and his Impala. I always say there are three main characters in Supernatural. Dean, Sam and the Impala. LOL.-Did anyone ever tell you your perspective is seriously skewed?- LOL! Nice.“You’re a luddite! LOL! Dean's not sure if he should be insulted or not nice!

Aww I love the part with Dean not having control of Standford...very insightful K!

Truckers and hello kitty? Two of my worst fears combined!

Aw Sam wants to know what he missed!-and it wasn’t to save the passengers, not really.- So true! brovo!
wild wolf free17 3/23/08 . chapter 1
Aww. Lovely.
222222222222 2/14/08 . chapter 1
Never thought about how they got back to the Impala!Hm!
KatieLB 2/11/08 . chapter 1
Dean in a saturn would be funny... it was horrible enough seeing him in the beater in BUABS... good job
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