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| The Bogan 2008-03-28 ch 1,  | abuseThat was one of the saddest fics I have ever read. I almost cried. It was written really well and you deserve all of the praise you have for it. |
| helpmydeath 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abusewow, that was so awsome. you did a fabulous job writing it! it was kinda angsty but in a really good way. i almost always hate fics that have Draco as the main character but i love this one! the way you used 2nd person was so awsome and unique; i don't think i've ever read something like this! you captured how he wants to punish himself so that's why he self-injures and a lot of people just can't seem to do that, so great job. |
| The Dagdah's Priestess 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI couldn't read this and not leave a review, I truely love the way you've written this. I like the way you seem to be talking to Draco, it's quite an unusual style but I think it works really well. I'm a huge fan of angst but I'm actually glad this one has a happier ending to it, it works really well |
| Angel-o-Darkness 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abusegood job |
| liddle.girl.lucy 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI finally saw a teenage version of Draco Malfoy that I liked. I liked the heart to heart with Harry. At first, however, I thought it was Ron. |
| Ariella K-J 2008-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseA-MAZ-ING |
| xxpiratexx 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was very powerful. It was moving, as well. The use of second person was very appropriate. Specific compliment: I like how you didn't introduce Harry when he started talking, but rather spoke of his name after he left. Specific criticism: The sentence: "You end up sitting down...because why not?" That is a pretty weak paragraph. If you could add some more emotion to it, or even just a bit of color (I know, I sound crazy), it would be much better. I doubt anybody would notice that, though, because the rest of it is a very well developed fic. Keep writing! ~Rose |
| GoddessofYouth 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, that's some powerful stuff. |
| silversaz 2008-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! u hav got a great mystery and its a great oneshot. keep up the good work! saz |
| harmonylilylove 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThat's really deep. I loved it. Very nicely written. |
| witchfromsouth 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseNice story! Slightly bitter sweet. About selfpunishment, I've read Elizabeth Culmers' Knives at but it hurts a little... This story, in exchange, is quite sweet and heals, if you know what I mean... |
| Dodger Gilmore 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseIf there's anyone I can see doing this in HP I think it's Draco. It's not really my type of story (anymore), but you did it well. I especially liked his little meeting with Harry, and that they didn't become best friends, but that a moment could just be a moment and nothing more. You really made me feel for Draco. |
| ImagingThings 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseAww... Poor Draco! Feeling so guilty! |
| laura sedai 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was fantastic! Love the way you use the present tense and "you" instead of the normal third person/past tense. Keep up the writing! =D |