This was so great! :D I loved that Zuko woke up! XD
I'll read into your other stuff too...

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I love it!! Pleases write more soon!!

i love zutara! great story! keep writing!

aw!! so cute!! awesomeness!

ooh, that was cute. Loved it. and loved the interaction with Katara, Sokka and Zuko at the end. Great story.

That was really cute. :) Though, a suggestion to your writing? Try to keep yourself from starting so many sentences with "She" over and over again. It get's a bit tiresome. Keep your transitions fresh.

Other than that, I have to say, I enjoyed this very much. :)

-karen

Ah, I loved it! Very cute.

love it!

lol. she shoves him off the side. How cruel! But nice oneshot!

It was cute (: I liked it.

Loved it!

Oh, that is SO cute! xoxoxo

cool love the idea shame it's not longer i was really wanting to know what happend next! lol!hope u keep up the cool storys!
~*~meg~*~

One thing... the title.

Consider changing it. FFN doesn't allow special characters like dashes and ellipses (...) to be used in the title. So, to the average onlooker... your title sounds really retarded. No offense.

Second thing... I don't think that you took your time with this story. Not enough details, and not enough characterization. Why did Katara like him? Why was she attracted to him? What caused it? All of these questions are unanswered. And that line, "she was a teenage girl, she could have her fun" makes Katara sound superficial and unreal.

On a positive note, your grammar and spelling checks out. It's not a bad one-shot... but it could have been way better.

--Nova.