Great story so far. Looking forward to reading more! :)

Hello!
Plz you can't put this story on hold! I actually check this everyday hoping u have updated.Plz the story is so intriguing and u r going to be more than a little evil by puting it on hold.
OR
What u can do is put it on hiatus and write this story completely and then post a chapter every week.Yhink about it.Hopefully u will cume around!
BEST WISHES
Arooma :)

amazing,awesome story!when i opened it i thought it would be just another typical story about rose and scorpius hating each other in school and in there last year they would realise that they loved each other when they each saw another with a gf/bf. but u have twisted the plot making it more realisting.i absolutely love it.

iam a feminist 2 and let me tell u how much i hate when it ALWAYS is weak,pathetic girl that needs help from a beautiful,strong,charming boy! c'mon people we r in 21st century show us girls some respect and don't make us feel un-dignifed(i know there is no such and i apologise deeply if u did not like my blabbing.
u go girl! and the beauty of a story is in the reader's eyes not the story itself.and i just love it!
have fun writing the next chap,
i think its good to be a impulsive writer becuz things can be suprising and the story doesn't drag on with audience knowing what happens next,
have a good day ,
update soon ,
best wishes ,
arooma

I bet you're thinking "Finally Kayy is going to review!" Sorry bout the long wait. I haven't been on in about two months. I'm sort of ignoring SOTM.
Anyway,

I think this is the best chapter by far. I loved the mystery! I'm dying to know what happens!

And if Rose and Scorpius don't get together in the end I will scream!

Much Love,
Kayy

Great chapter. I like your story a lot ad will be disappointed if you give up... I didn't catch if you won't update anymore, I hope not, please.

P.S.: (Sorry for extra review) You, my dear, should be quicker with those updates. Or I'll set JS on you.

Sorry, I promised I'd review but I don't trust this public computer, so I'm not logging in. Any ways...

Don't worry 'bout the POV changes. They are very easy to follow. Which is saying a lot: not many writers manage it so well...

As for the story: great buildup and nice cliffie. Virtual cookies to you.

R/Sc conflict : Total win :-D

Cheers,
-Phaethon

Well, I find it great. Eventually I would like to know what will follow... I really hope you won't give up because I really like it.

I really like this story and I can't wait to see where you go with it! Not only is the murder mystery part intriguing, but I can't wait to see how scorpius and rose get together... keep up the good work and don't get discouraged! you have faithful readers!!

I like this story so far! Yay, more Scorpius and Rose! Just two things that I would point out: his name is Scorpius HYPERION Malfoy, I believe, and Ginny's name is spelled Ginevra. I am sure you have been told that in other reviews (sorry if I am repeating old info!), and it is really no big deal, but I have an unusual name, too, so I pay attention to odd spellings (probably too much, lol.). Looking forward to an update, and I will add it to my alerts. :-)

Hey, Don't worry about the inconsistent lengths of chapters, it's not something that most people think about, if it's short its short, if its long its long, people will get over stuff like that so don't worry! Now about updating, I say as long as your making an effort and it doesn't take like all summer or something like that, you're good, you have a life outside of Fanfiction, so don't dwell on it too much. And last, but not least, This chapter was great, (and because I don't think I left a review on the last chapter (and if I did, oh well!) I really liked that one too, showing their backround was really good.) I don't think that the POV changes was a bad thing, and you did have the little "--" things, so it was easy to understand! So, anyways, I'm done my rambling, Good Job, and keep it up!
~Tajzanna

This chapter was okay you don't have to stress out about it and fnallt the action begins. So Scorpius is a half-blood, but so is Rose. Anyway hope you update soon and with a longer chapter. The way you showed the different p.o.v was really slear as well so you don't have to worry about that either.

For some reason i didn't have the story on my alerts and i just saw that you updated. Anyway nice chapter , reminds me a little of how James sr aked Lily out all the time but i really iked the chapter and those moments were really funny. Hope we learn why Rose doesn't like him.

Waouw. great chapter, really. Just one question: is Scorpius a half-brood? I didn't catch that. Hope you'll update soon...

I'm still a bit confused, but that just might be the after affects of the Geometery test I had today. Good chapter, Rayy!
Prongs Jr and Draconic?
I found that quite funny. Looks like they are trying to be the Maradaur's, eh?
Keep going, Rayy. It's amazingly interesting.