|Reviews for Dusk|
| Tulippen 6/1/12 . chapter 25
This is the only story where I hate the goblin king :D I'm so glad you started updating again. the chapter was great, and I can't wait to hear more from the Elvin king, please update soon :D
| Dire Heart 5/16/12 . chapter 25
Good chapter... i kinda hope they don't get to her in time though... :)
| AiramS 5/13/12 . chapter 25
I can't decide whether I hate this story or love it. It's really well written, but I absolutely hate love triangles. I like Marak. And I like Rex. Urgh, it's so annoying. I want them both to have her! Why did you have to write Rex into the story.
Oh, well. Still a good story. Just hate the triangle part
| Tulippen 5/12/12 . chapter 24
I can't decide on wether I want them to rescue her or Marak to marry her :( Please update soon :D
| OlliMolli 1/31/12 . chapter 10
Wow that was intense! Love that we got some background knowledge. I hope they lived normal lives to though, cause that was one of the thing that really appealed too me, you know, that they are two normal teenagers brought in too this world. Gonna go read next chapter!
| OlliMolli 1/30/12 . chapter 5
Very interesting chapter. Leaves me wanting more. I really liked the way you described the king, it was very picturesque!
| OlliMolli 1/30/12 . chapter 3
Oh THANKS YOU! I have been looking for a good Hollow Kingdom fanfic for so long, because I thought there were so many amazing posibilities with this fandom. But none of the ones i found were interesting and the ones that were, were poorly written or way too short. And then I found you, haven't read more than your first two chapters, but i am very excited to see what happens next, so tnx!
| Dire Heart 1/6/12 . chapter 24
dun dun dun! personally i think she should end up with Marak... :) just saying
| maille wolf 1/5/12 . chapter 24
Oh the intensity! Please continue I believe I am hooked.
| Saphira.Flametongue 1/5/12 . chapter 24
AWESOME! Can't wait for the next update! Poor Arisa!
| maille wolf 1/3/12 . chapter 23
Aaahhh! I am loving it! More plz
| Guest 12/22/11 . chapter 23
this chapter was really good cant wait to read the next one
| Dire Heart 5/4/11 . chapter 23
aw, poor door!
| Mari 5/3/11 . chapter 23
YAAAAY, u updated, haha cool that hannah could destroy the door, well i hope they get Arisa back.. or not? i dont know, i like marak too, u can't right a hollow kingdom story without a marak in it, anyway update soon, and plz right more about hannah and the elf dude :D
| Saphira.Flametongue 5/1/11 . chapter 23
This is gonna be epic! Let's see what Marak will do when his precious door is in a pile of wood xD