I love the story so far. Keep updating.

It's a good story, but the plot is pretty confusimg.

very sad and very romantic. write more soon!

very interesting MJB! i have some questions, but they'll probably be explained later. like, who's isaac, why is prowl purposefully not recharging himself fully, blah blah blah. you'll probably explain it later. so i'll...just stop talking. :D

Actually, I am fairly confused. But the sort of confused where you know things will be explained eventually so maybe its a good thing.