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Reviews For: Pendulum

Dakota Storm
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abusethat was so sweet i loved it.
TexasJen
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseNice story! I like how it was Horatio wanting to bring their relationship out into the open, how his career was not the most important thing to him anymore.

You ended with "And so it began..."...sure hope you continue this!
myacova
2008-02-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat start! You've certainly got my attention! Can't wait for more.
paperback-romance
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseCute story! Thanks for writing!
randomwriting
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abuseVery enjoyable, nice capture of both characters. I love the way you write these two, you have the ability to make me see them through your eyes and to appreciate the possibility of this pairing. Loved this line, 'His hands flared his suit jacket to the sides as they took their rightful spot on his hips.' So very Horatio. And I loved Calleigh's succinct message at the end. Great job!
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