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kosmokomik 2008-03-16 ch 4,	abuseTook me a while to get around to read, but it's pleasant to see Shepard with Liara. I really liked this story, awesome work.
Winter Lady 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseI think this is a great story. I like the interaction among the characters. The descriptives and imagery were well done.
MiSTrGosH 2008-03-04 ch 4,	abuseAwesome. Wonderfully written. You seem to get so much story in such a small space. I like also how you keep true to the characters personalities. Biggest bonus for me is the pairing. great job, looking forward to more of your stories.
Who Is Caligula 2008-02-14 ch 2,	abuseEletania was the mossy planet featured in the "Data Module" mission, as well as the short story "A Few Dead Monkeys", which was my first attempt at a Mass Effect story. I think I'm the only person who appreciates the self-referential humor, though. Anyway, thanks for all your kind words. The concept of nakedness certainly forms the foundation of the story. For some, nudity suggests vulnerability and weakness. For others, it implies honesty and self-awareness. And, as the story concludes, I hope to demonstrate the classic association of nudity with sexuality. No naked turians in this story, though. Sorry, ladies.
kosmokomik 2008-02-14 ch 2,	abuseI'm finding this very fascinating; how everyone seems to be on edge, and the feeling of... Well, the aftermath. It's very much like the title says, except in a more... Emtional sense, perhaps. Rambling now, but I love your grip of the characters. You can convey their personalities with just a few well-written sentences, nailing them perfectly.
Chaosian 2008-02-13 ch 2,	abuseI'm seriously beginning to dig your writing style. Great job.
Wyvern Rider 2008-02-13 ch 2,	abuse"if he could withstand incessant taunts on Eletania" Didn't get that one.. mind explaining? [Yes, I know I'm stupid] But anyways, I like the way this is written, with some mild humor in it ^^ A "lawled" after the second chapter. Poor Garrus xD
Tolas 2008-02-13 ch 2,	abuseAnother good story, looking forward to see where it goes. I really liked the conversation between Wrex and Garrus, poor Garrus got burned ;_;
Leftnt Sharpe 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseGlad I'm not the only one who refers to Chakwas as 'the good Doctor'. A good start, different style to your other storys, I liked the part about Dr Chakwas, I wonder how old is actually is.
Who Is Caligula 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseShepard might be inclined to dismiss her unusual thoughts, since she is exhausted, half-asleep, and heavily medicated. It was my little nod to all the Garrus/Shepard romance stories out there, but it's not indicative of where the story is actually going. Sorry if it seemed misleading. Nakedness, I should also point out, is intended as a metaphor. If someone is uncomfortable with the literal thought of a naked human body, they might have difficulty enjoying certain elements of Mass Effect in its original form.
Aeryn Phoenix 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuse"Shepard found herself wondering if Garrus had ever seen a naked woman before." Rawr. I'll pretend my mind didn't wander when I read this. Looking forward to seeing where this is going.
The Great D 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseWell this is certainly more compact and racy than your previous efforts; taking this one in a different direction?

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