Really, really funny! Teriffic story! Too funny about the ducks and Carlos's 'invention.
Great job!

Ha ha ha. Cute story. I love it. Catch ya on the flip side.

Excellent story! And yes it would be too good a story for a friend or anybody else to pass up. Hee hee

Cute. I mean like totally adorable squeaky huggy squishy cute. I adored it. It's nice to finally read something with a problem and solution that doesn't involve blood and guts all the time. (Don't get me wrong, I like stuff like that as much as the next girl, but sometimes its nice to read something that makes me feel fuzzy).

This is absolutly terrific! Keep up the great work, you captured both boys perfectly.

haha! That was cool, I bet the woman yelling in german said spilir

lol...definitely awesome!

Cute story! I don't know if you know this, but something similar to your story (ducklings falling down a drainage pipe and then being rescued by a police officer) actually happened in Vancouver, Canada a few months back.