Thank you all for your support and criticism, if the criticism is practical!
Meilin Rae

So...sad...WAAAAAAA! This...was...beautiful...

Totally OOC. Heero would never act like that. Relena would never act like that. And do you really think that Relena's children would go to public school? You antagonists were completely impractical. You didn't back up their hostilities toward the "Yuys" at all. You seem to have only written this story in order to appease your desire to kill off the family. Did you think this plot through at all?

so sad but wonderful!

Hm, well i thought that ur whole idea for the Johnson twins, and the doc and all was a little... dumb, but I think the story could have been better if you have taken a little more time, and put in more details it could be better.

Ooh... good story. Very sad and kind of morbid, but this was reality this week for people in the WTC towers who lost their lives instantly, along with the people who lost their loved ones. Oh, and you touched on school shootings and malpractice all in one story, even though the Johnsons didn't seem to have a motive... Oh well, it was good.

That was so sad...I was crying as I was reading it...*Suiko Star**

hmm...a twisted fic, yet creative.

Girl, that was beautiful. As always, you rock. I hope to read more soon. Love ya, girl! GRELLE AND BLAIR FOR LIFE!

WPY