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Reviews For: The Little Things In Life: Future preview!

zropin
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abusewow! this is amazing! i think jacob would imprint her :) after he saves her of course
keep going
Symeria
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseaarrghh, I need more now!
xokarina9432
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseWOW! That is absolutly wonderful! cant wait!
your an awesome writer and you story right now is prob my fav at this point!
ImagineXD
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseTen bucks Bella saves her!
Anjel-Eri
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abuseLol. She sounds like Bella. But in a good way.
Oh, and why would Edward call her his wolf considering the Jacob thing? nothing wrong with it, just funny.
Can't wait until you contine the great adventures of Holly!
RainShowerSunshine
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abuseI really can't wait for all of this to happen. It sounds like you're going to do somthing really intersting with this.
orangemice311
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abusepoor Holly... she's so much like Bella.
soccerdog12
2008-02-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseUHG! for no being related, this girl is too much like bella! What's the deal with the being his wolf? hmm...does that mean...? ah! i can't stand the wait. hurry writing! i don't know how long i can take it!

p.s.
nothing much, but some grammar problems
twilightlover123
2008-02-22
ch 1, anon.
abusein the little things in life in your upcoming chapters you should have holly be that old and have this part in it
pirate-princess1
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abuseOMG! I can't wait to read the rest of ur story now! I look forward to this (which is pathetic, when you think about it, that the only thing I have to look forward to in life is someone's fanfiction...)daily! Write more please!
tinkapjill40
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseThis preview just makes me want more chapters in the little things in life! THanx for the preview though. =D
Emmy Cullen
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseNO! Don't make her grow up too fast! But I still LIKE it, I just think that...yeah. Ok, well, bye!
iamtabby
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseSo many questions, I do not know where to start. I guess I will just have to wait for you to write more on this subject. Holly sounds a little like Bella when she was human, always thinking about others and wanting to protect others.

Good job.
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