Wait, what. Roxas is a guy...who wears a skirt at school and is the cheerleader squad's captain. While it is a hilarious and cute image, it broke my brain. Explanation please? o_o

Cute.
I dunno, it's rather lovely.
Roxas, dressing as a girl?
Somehow, I can only see that as HOT HOT HOT.
(Yeah, I'm a loser T_T)
Really liked it. :)
Not much more to say.
:D

I think the whole 'roxas in a skirt with cherry lip-gloss' thing gave me a fan-gasm for a second. Wonderfully writen.

Wow! This was great. I loved the way that you wrote Axel so much, so unique and how he was trying so hard to impress and get Roxas' attention. I loved the flow of this story, how things would happen and then you would make such a nice, smooth transition. I love a cross dressing Roxas, a lot. And I love how Axel did too. And how Roxas initiated their kiss! Ahh, just made me squeal xD "and time was going fast with only a few months left until they tossed their hats and parted ways." I like that line a lot. I'm going to be graduating soon T_T But yeah, this story was so cute and humorous, I loved it!

Hmm... and they just accept his crossdressing? Everyone knows Roxas is a male, yes? XD (lol this probably wouldn't work out too well at MY hickvillage of a school, ahyuck.)

I liked it. The title pwns. lmao, I'll never look at cheerleaders the same again XD

OMG. Puree Amasing

eh... is there a REASON roxy's in a skirt other than just for fun? (i feel like there's a back story waiting to happen here > D)

this was lovely. I highly enjoyed myself

~h-ai

OHMYGOD CHEERLEADER!CROSSDRESSING!ROXAS AHJSDVUSFVUYA DFASF;FHGJ

You're my hero, seriously. This fic fucking win. And I can't get enough of Roxas in fluffy dress and bobby pins. I would totally drawn this... if I could draw, that is. D:
And Axel with all that perviness, and the pansy jokes, and all the fluffyness, and and and... so cute~ *spazzspazz*

Roxas the cheer captain. Awesomeful.

We love your story and we’d like to say
Nowadays fanfiction like yours are few
Thank you, your story made our day
So we hope you enjoy this review.

Not only are we fans of Kingdom Hearts
We love all of your stories on livejournal
The Madness Series? We know all the parts!
We’ve laughed over them since time immemorial.

So we’re positively overjoyed
That you have an account on fanfiction
This new story came out, we were buoyed
Up by our euphoria, we made a prediction:

That this new story with the strange long title
‘Football Game Panty-Flasher’ (the whole nine yards)
Would be the thing to make our day brighter
Even though our exams are soon on the cards.

We were right! We read through cover to cover
(Figuratively, of course, we actually scrolled)
Axel chases Roxas to become his lover
“Do your work first.” Well, that’s him told!

A world where even certain boys would wear skirts
Was slightly strange to us, all things considered
But any tale where Axel with Roxas flirts
Was wonderful, of course, to us as we read.

The language was, as usual, great
We loved every bit, your neat turn of phrase
Axel takes Roxas out on his first date
That in itself deserves high-order praise!

Characterization is simply superb
We shall discuss Axel and Roxas now
Axel is, as we all know, a complete pervert
Making Roxas’ skirt fly, never mind how.

Roxas and all his high kicks and spins
Gives a good chuckle to the reader
He’s so cute! Especially those bobby pins
But most of all, that he is a cheerleader!

And he is, for some unknown reason, not
Glued to his fellow cheerleaders at the hip
Meanwhile, Axel’s still trying an awful lot
To slam doors and get Roxas’ skirt to flip.

Axel is so lively, so brash, so REAL
You even add touches like procrastination
We can see clearly how he must feel
When friends drag him to skateboard – unknown destination!

But he’s silly as well, and adorably sweet
When he takes Roxas out on his very first date
Pansies in hair that’s not all that neat
Always the gentlemen, “Your chariot awaits.”

We enjoyed many parts, most certainly the date!
Axel being just a tad old-school
How Roxas could eat! And not gain weight!
And them breaking every stereotype rule.

We enjoyed your story very much
From Axel’s antics to Roxas’ skirt frills
We love how it has that special touch
And applaud your marvelous writing skills!

The number of your stories we’ve read (with smut!)
Comes to a pretty large amount
We’d usually want to give our comments but
We have no livejournal account.

Dear Mocha, you bring us so much delight
Your stories never fail to fill us with glee
We wish you the best in whatever you write
And look forward to the Madness Series part three!

~Kitty and Magnitude
of Eleison X I I I

omfg, roxas with bobby pins is the cutest mental image I have ever imagined!! I was very amused by all the skirts, 'specially the frilly pink one. I loved this, it was so unexpected! XD.

*faves*

THAT ENDING WAS ADORABLE
I don't think it could have been any better >/<
My gosh I was giggling madly at the thought of a VERY preppy, VERY smiley Roxas in a VERY short skirt xD
If I had the skills to draw human anatomy correctly, I would DEFINITELY draw that as kiriban(gift art) to you. I hope the thought helps D:
OTL headdesk PHAIL
ANYWAYS~ This was SO incredibly cute, that I absolutely MUST favorite it *squeals*
Maybe one day, when my drawing has improved, I'll draw a picture of a smiling (NO WAI) Roxy in a cheerleading outfit

Cute~ ^^ (Though it was kinda confusing at some points)

This was great. I was a little confused though about why Roxas wore a skirt most of the time though. Did he have a lot of practice days that need the uniform?

Whatever ever else though, I liked how Axel did everything in this fic. He was very sweet and nice on the date, which seems almost unAxelish (but it works really well). The ending with Axel being a carpenter trainer was funny, since he's a pyro. His perversion and need to see Roxas' undies was quite humorous. Excellent fic!

-MC

IOUFGEFNBESPFBN..;SDBFIWBESFCNAS!

ADORABLE!

The fluff!

*spazz*

I loved it. Fantabulous. :)