will do ;)

uhhm... well, you could have put... i dunno, signs, to show where there are scene changes, because that was kinda confusing... but otherwise, great chapter!

Very interesting chapter, and I too wonder why Jiraiya sealed her chakra! Will be hunting down the next chapter. And thank you for writing such an amazing naruto story!

so cool I wish you would wright the next chapter please

yay!! i really liked the bit with orochimaru and kabuto

That was great!

lol the chappy was a bit funny thank u for da update n the lenght ...well keep it up :D n please update soon lmao.

Orochimaru is such a pedophile! And Tsunade, planning to trade Grace like she's some possession. I can't wait to see what happens next. I think you dwelt too much on the training though. The pace of the story is becoming a bit slow with emphasis on parts that are not really that important.

Wow.
Quick update!
Wasn't expecting one as quick as this after the one you updated not too long ago :O
Quite liked this chapter too!
It felt like more happened in it than usual plus along with the fact that Grace could answer the question but not understand what it was asking was interesting in itself also.
I really want her to realize their feelings towards one another!! TT_TT
And her real name is still bugging me too... I wanna know!! XD
Keep up the good work, this is an awesome story! One of my favorites ;)
Update soon!

I REALLY love it! I hope Tsunade tricks her into a bet! Can you imagine her suddenly running through Konoha gates and glomping Sasuke? LOL! Can't wait for the next chapter!

that was funny! and romantic! and...and...is there going to be a sequal to it?

lol aww i think grace and sasuke togather is cute^^

Very amusing chapter. I agree, those sexy Halloween costumes are only used to perpetuate men's fantasies. My sister went as a sexy Catholic school girl and I was like that's so cliche, we're Catholic. I did some gender bending and went as Jack Sparrow. I took a couple of pics after I got dressed but then my camera died . What about you? What did you dress up as for Halloween?

Anyway, the chapter was highly entertaining I loved Sasuke's reaction to Grace's costume. Though I honestly think Sasuke as a vampire is cliche, many other people have done it. Now, Sasuke as Murtagh from Eragon would have been interesting!

That was great!

HAPPEH TIEMS~

i lurve halloween~~

hehe, well, for a rushed chapter, it wasnt too bad! there were a few amusing typos here and there... like at one point you wrote "costumers" instead of "customers"

which i found almost hilarious ^^

hehe, well, d'aww, poor sasuke - plans foiled AGAIN! Dont worry, you'll get another chance some day... *pat pat*

...i can imagine him glaring at me now and i'm scared.

gah.

HAPPEH HALLOWEN~~

lol i thought ull never update! it wwas a seriously good chapter (ignoring grammer mistake) n da lenght was short but ,overall a good chappy! keep it up n update soon plus hppy halloween (late)