This is actually really good for a seven-year-old. I'm impressed with her writing, and I agree with you when you say she could be a great writer someday.
Tell her to keep it up. She has a real talent.

- dramaqueenforsure

To the awesome seven year old writer- You have got to be the BEST seven year old writer in the world. When my sibling was 7, I couldn't even understand his stories, and he had some pretty strange ideas. You go, person! 8D

aw! fantastic! she's got a fabulous future ahead of her. :)

Aw! That was adorable! She's only seven?! God bless her. She's very good with details.

Wow... that was awesome! This is better than some stories I've read on this site by teenagers and adults! I've been writing for a while now, though I started when I was 12, not 7, and I cannot wait until she starts putting up her own stories here!

Tell her I can't wait to buy her book when the time comes!

(Thumbs up)

aww! its so sweet! i Love it! impressive for a 7 year old!

Heh heh. Very cute. I love the way you bought the other guys in. Keep writing and have fun with it.

What is this I hear? I believe I hear the sound of a future writer being born! That was lovley, simply lovley! ;D

Oh! That was good.

and I haven't heard that song in forever.

(by the way, I wrote when I was seven too!)

I'm seeing another great author in the making!

Oh my, this is adorable! I can't believe she wrote this by herself, it's really good!!

I just want to give her a huge hug now, ahaha.

Did she write that song herself? Holy crud, it was SO CUTE! Give her a hug and tell her she's awesome for me, 'k?

Was that really by a 7 year old?

Wow, she's really talented, that was sweet and not just because she's seven, she's got serious talent!

a seven-year-pld wrote this!?! I know freshman who couldn't write that well.