Please update soon, its such a great story.

This is such a good story! It's a real good Greed/OC story and I'm sad to see you haven't updated in a while. I hope you get around to writing more because I'm in love with it.

NOOOO! Please update! Don't leave us hangin' . . . (cries in the corner)

This story has such great detail, and Greed's so cute! Helping Rayven with all of this, it's adorable.

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Yeah I know this isn't a laughing matter but I laugh because I like to. And Greed, such a charmer.

Damn! POOR RAYVEN! that's gotta be so hard. Wow, she kicked ass! Perverts. All men are perverts. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow. Ouch! That had to hurt like hell! Poor girl! interesting.

This story is absolutely amazing! Please don't abandon it. There's not enough great stories about Greed with OCs (Same with Envy :P) anyway please update this awesome story!

You have a great opening here, with lots of potential. I hope you update this soon!

I like this story sounds interesting

Keep it up!)

Please,please update4! For me? *gives puppy dog eyes*

Please update soon!

PLEASE! Finish this story! I got to the end of chapter two and I was like WTF! o_ O and stuff

But good job! :D

This story is very well written. There aren't that many GreedxOC stories out there an yours is the best i've read. ;3 I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

hey i really enjoy the story so far. im reading it on my phone so the small print is killing me, but other than that i am really getting into it. i hope you continue it. i cant wait to read the rest