 DeadlyCaellie aka Iji 2008-03-23 . chapter 5I'm so sorry for only reviewing until chapter three last time!! I'm so sorry!! For some reason, I thought there was only three chapters, although I don't know why. I should have seen it! Sorry!! Stupid me!! *bangs her head in the wall*
But I still feel the same way about the story. It is just as awesome as before (if not more), and I'm waiting eagerly for your next update! The small stories/flashbacks seems like a great idea! Go go go!! =^^=
... *Tristan forever!*
~Caellie~ |
 DeadlyCaellie aka Iji 2008-03-23 . chapter 3Here I am, I said I would read it! ;-) And I think it's great! I don't understand why you've only got two (now three) reviewers. This is incredibly well written and extremely good reading material. I think Tristan got way to few appearances in the film, so I'm watching those he have over and over again! :p
I especially liked this last chapter, because of what Tristan did for Dagonet, and although I am a Tristan-fan, I kinda like him getting hurt. Hell, I don't know why!
I was just thinking about the "Knight Down" part of the chapter title when Galahad and Gawain talked, so I saw Tristan falling of the horse coming. But that doesn't make it any less good, though! ;-)
The only thing I gotta say about your story, is the Tristan/OC thing. I'm NOT a fan of those, so then naturally, the story's popularity falter a bit in my mind. But, it is your story, I didn't like him getting killed either, but that's how it was supposed to be, so go on!
Keep it up, GREAT story! =^^=
~Caellie~ |