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| YouLivexYouDie 2008-08-13 ch 13,  | abuseInteresting. Throughout the story I noticed some mispells but whatever. |
| Britishgl 2008-07-26 ch 12, | abuseUpdate soon please! FAST! I lOvE it! Can't wait 4 the next chapter! :D Post it soon! |
| Green Animelover 2008-07-03 ch 12, | abusegreat story! i really enjoyed reading it! |
| PrincessDudette 2008-07-03 ch 12, | abuseLol! Carmen and David BUSTED! And the fluff at the end of the chapter was really nice. I ♥ Hailey! Lol... Happy 4th of July... although I don't celebrate it, since I don't live in the US! xD |
| Green Animelover 2008-07-02 ch 11, | abuseamazing chapter! i enjoyed reading it! |
| Green Animelover 2008-05-21 ch 10, | abusei liked it a lot really well written update soon :) |
| Berries-R-Blue 2008-05-12 ch 10, | abuseI love it! One of the better Harry stories I've read. Update soon! |
| JibbaJabba 2008-04-09 ch 10, | abuseA little sugary sweet for me in places, but I liked it well enough. It was nice to see another side of Harry for once; someone who's trying very hard to be the CEO his father wanted him to be . . . even though that wasn't who he really was. At least, that's how I interpreted it. Nicely done. |
| DerekShepherd 2008-03-10 ch 9, | abuseHey, Harry's much hotter than Hailey's last guy, lol. Great job on another chapp! |
| DerekShepherd 2008-02-28 ch 8, | abuseYeah! Maybe it isn't 'pretend' anymore... Great chap! |
| PrincessDudette 2008-02-27 ch 8, | abuseOh, the love is growing |
| DerekShepherd 2008-02-27 ch 7, | abuseSome how I really don't think you'll get any flames. ;) I love it! Cute to see Hailey and Harry getting closer (ohlala!) but then again, who couldn't?!? Great job! |
| PrincessDudette 2008-02-26 ch 7, | abuseBaby Bumps! I heart Carmen! Lol, she's a great character. And the story is going great, can't wait to see what's gonna happen at the part-ayy.. Well.. make your short chapter phase finish soon, i love long chappies. Update soon! |
| PrincessDudette 2008-02-24 ch 6, | abuseOkay. Short, but pretty. Hey! Harry seems so into his "we have to make it look like it's true" role. Love the descriptions, please update soon! :)) |
| DerekShepherd 2008-02-24 ch 6, | abuseHaha! Harry got her on that one... Yeah you have spelling errors, but the story's kick **, so whatever. Great job! I love Harry's arrogance! |