Great story - totally in character for all of them. You're a fantastic writer.

You won't hear any complaints from me about John-whump for the sake of it *g*. As usual you had a great grasp of the characters, especially John. I'm with you on the whole family thing too, how the team looks after their own, making sure John was fed and comfortable and had company.

leave it to john to get his butt kicked just checking on his team lol :)

Loved it! Some nice whump with some team love, what more could you want? :)

You carry on writing whump for the sake of whump sweetie! It sure makes me happy! Another lovely whumpy story. Well done and thanks for sharing! :)

Yeah I definately liked this =)

You can't beat a good whump - and this was a good whump!! Nice filling of team caring too. |Thanks and look forward to more from you soon - always enjoy it.

I do love the feel of the SGA family. Very nice! ^^

Great fic!

I really liked it.