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Reviews for: Not At First Sight
Raspberries-Vanilla
2009-05-17 . chapter 1
This was such a sweet story.

The interaction between Kento and Sage was lovely and showed that no matter how rough their individual interactions and arguments, that friendship is something that is forged and solid. I also really did enjoy that Mia was their focal point.

Another thing I found massively adorable was what would wrote for Sage,saying that he would die and kill to protect her, because that was sweet beyond words, and considering he did rescue her and cares for her was beyond words in the love section for me.

Finally, the Sage and Mia interaction was something that I could have seen occurring in the show, if the series was a bit longer and more focused to young adults/adults age range.
RoseJustice
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
I've read this story before and I thought I'd like to read it again...it's still just as good! Sage is obviously your fav character and Kento is mine, so I LOVE this story! I'm favoriting it!
Juzu
2008-11-09 . chapter 1
Aww! I thought that this was really good! I really like Sage! ^_^ Good job!
Boggy
2008-04-03 . chapter 1
I love a good Shuu-centric piece. He suffers a number of injustices (no pun intended) at the hands of the YST fanfiction community. It just makes sense to me that Shuu's good with secrets, you know? As the oldest of five, I imagine he has a good deal of practice juggling confidential information. XD

And I love the Seiji and Shuu interaction here, because the two are often at odds in the series (though it doesn't stop them from conspiring against Touma in Tenkuden). Seiji still jumps at the opportunity to reprimand Shuu (it simply isn't YST unless Seiji's barking at SOMEONE), but appreciates his supporting of Seiji's complicated feelings for Nasuti. It puts an interesting dynamic on the relationship.

Flawless execution, as always.
Jaguarsolaris
2008-03-25 . chapter 1
Wow. this fic is supberb. Wow. okay I would like to see more sage and Mia fics if you do decide to do some more ronin warriors fic.
zorra
2008-03-08 . chapter 1
Wow, what a great Kento/Sage bonding story. I really enjoyed reading this and your attention to detail is amazing! Wonderful story!
Alexia8246
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
:) It was cute. I loved it!! :)
Hibana
2008-02-12 . chapter 1
Oh... so cute! Nice job!
raiderette
2008-02-12 . chapter 1
Wonderful! I love this series and the pairing. Maybe you should tackle some more situations. Perhaps some Mia/Sage sap time when he returns from being captured? Anywho, great fic. Write another soon!
maryd
2008-02-12 . chapter 1
Beautiful, Beautiful! The focus on Mia and then on Sage, and using Kento as a witness...Really well done.
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