This seems like it has lots of potential to get more interesting. Hopefully you'll update soon.

I'm hopeing you're gonna continue this, 'cause I can't wait to read more!!

You know, I think this story is very promising! It's something new and you should definately continue it :)

Really nice start! Little Victorie is cute, and I like this assertive Hermione, who's as confident as ever. I can't wait to see what else you have in store!

You should definately write more. Very engaging.

i really like this idea.. its turning out very interesting and i cant wait to see more! :D

I like the feeling of the story, please continue! However, that mention of Veela males is pretty strange... I wouldn't like that, but it's your fic, go on...

this is nice so far, hopefuly you will continue and bill is left out of the picture for a long time lol , update soon

great story, but... what's going on with the veela males? it's driving me crazy so please update asap

Great beginning, and I can't wait to see where it goes. I've added this to my favorite stories list. Keep up with the great writing, I just know that you're going to make this a great story.

Ooh... nice. Hope to see the next chapter soon.

great so far. i can't wait for more. Victorie is soo cute!

Amara

i was worried at first, wasn't sure if i wanted to see an already established bill/fleur to be separated.

but i couldn't resist. fleur/hermione fics win me over all the time!

and i love this! it's just so cute! and adding victoire, it's just really really cute. ^__^

god storie keep it up

jajaja ¡cute, continue please!