It's nice to read about Athrun and his father's relationship on Patrick's POV^^

This is very sad... A well written piece!

such a sad POV from patrick =(

... wow. Patrick is so off his rocker, he's on the floor. Nice vivid portrayal. I like how at one point he did acknowledge that Athrun wasn't really his son anymore. That was like the 'climax' of the story.

read this... is make me think... why Cagalli what to protect Athrun in "Being Athrun Zala" ... anyw... like always very good writing...keep going and i wait for more updates ...

great one shot.. superb vocabulary.. patrick is one of the best villain in seed.. better that dullindal.. but the way u ptray him here shows that he has a purpose on his evil doing and not just because he`s a genocidal freak.. love it! and not to forget how u get cagalli linked with the story without actually inserting her character in it.. im a bit bias since im her big fan.. and athrun too..hehehe.. keep up the good work and plz update fast for baz..cant wait for the developmnt.. its killing me..hihi

Le Creuset..

hmm.. who knew if Patrick was a gOod father or not before Lenore died? or even if she haven't?

nyWeiZ, never saw the gOod side of Patrick.. so.. I dunno.. *shrugs* demo, nice going with this fic! gave me an idea in what Patrick was thinking after he shot Athrun.. suteki! jaa ne in "BAZ"! ;3