Excellant Story!! OMG! Am so glad Ambrose is alright althrough he could have ben injured from the whole male baby machine thingy. Happy...that Cain is an honorable man that we had no doubt that he would love both Ambrose and Miracle once he found out the truth.

Awe how cute!!

Aww how cute. Can't wait to see more...update soonish!!

cliff hanger! Ohh u evil person! plz update soon this is awesome!!

Why am I not surprised to have to wait until the next chapter to see Cain's reaction? lol

Aside from a few small errors, the chapter read pretty well. Update soon!

~Twin

Hmm can't wait to see his reaction. It'll be very interesting to see.

Aww... Poor Ambrose... At least someone knows, and I'm glad he stood up for her when the Queen tried to take her... I thought I had this on story alert, but it appears I didn't since you were two chapters ahead of me and I had no email that it was updated... anyway, it is now. Looking forward to more.

I don't know how I missed the alert for chapter 5 but I did. (I'm good like that.) This chapter was interesting. I was wondering how Glitch had pulled off having a baby. Now I know. lol But I must ask...are you trying to put off Cain finding out to torture me or what? lol Looking forward to the next chapter.


~Twin

Hopefully everything turns out ok for him

ok... so are u gonna update again real soon? yes? please? no ones going to die right?

If you DON'T continue this story, death threats just might be imminent! LOL. I am trying to figure out what child bearing illness could Glitch have. I wonder.

Just be kind to the poor guy. Seriouslly a daughter needs her mother. And Crain needs his lover otherwise where would Crain and Miracle be without him?

Oh and update soonish

OH NOES! What happened to poor Ambrose?! *worryworryworry*

Death threats? Why would we kill you? If someone did, then you can't make him better!

Speaking of which... make him BETTER! Plez?

PS. lol at this rate, EVERYONE will know before Cain does!

Aside from a few little errors, this was a really good chapter. I liked the passion in Glitche's voice when he objected to the Queen's proposal and I loved Cain's little nickname for the baby. (but only because it was my nickname for my baby lol) You know, I wasn't expecting that ending...poor Glitch...aren't you putting him through enough? lol I still can't wait to see Cain's reaction.

Looking forward to your next update,
~Twin

I'm normally not a fan of these kinds of pairings, but there's just something about this story that strikes me...and I like it. Keep writing, I'm curious as to where this is going and if and when Wyatt is going to get mad when he finds out Glitch kept this baby a secret from him. I could totally see Wyatt going off when he realizes it was actually his biological child he stumbled upon because Glitch asked him about kids while he was half asleep and was upset by the answer he got.