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| Daemon hunter 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseSince I've read, it's only fair I review. Despite being a little bored with the whole FF7 fandom, your stories are always the ones worth coming back to. This one is no exception. In this, I particularly liked the poem and how it blended so well with the Magpie poem. The second chapter was interesting and provided a healthy spin on things. I particularly liked Tifa's take on Cloud (ie. not a childhood anything) and Aerith's relationship with Zack. I just hope that this isn't all because I sense you have so much more yet to give for this story. Eagerly awaiting an update. |
| Alantie Mistaniu 2008-02-15 ch 2, | abuseThis is very intriguing so far! You are certainly a talented writer, and I'm very excited to see where you go with this. Keep up the incredible work! |
| Micheal Lee 2008-02-12 ch 2, | abuseWoo! I liked it very much, how you inserted your ideas into Last Order, what could have been and what was ... and everything went pretty smoothly. DO continue, mate, or...is this it? :) Yay! First review! |