 anon 2009-12-18 . chapter 25 I'd mail you a beer, but I don't know your address :P
So this review will have to do :) |
 IfButOnly 2009-12-18 . chapter 25 If beer was all it took, i would have shipped your ** to the Heineken factory long ago! A tad on the short side of your usual work with almost no plot advancement, but well written as a filler chapter, furthering your already cemented point that harry is deranged, bella is crazy, voldemort is his usual self, and you are surely impressed with harry's martyrdom abilities. Anyways, at some point soon, would love to see the plot move forward.. perhaps less intricacies into harry's psych and more movement or general statements? At this rate you will easily hit 100 chapters. The first 10 chapters covered 10x the amount of events as compared to the last 13 or so. Anyways, always a follower, if not always a reviewer, hope to read more. On the sooner side of now.
IfButOnly |
 madsloth 2009-12-17 . chapter 24Seems like Harry was being a little over dramatic there, you know playing it up for some reason… as if he had a crowd watching he wanted to impress with an overly complicated plan after all why would he not have had them leave before he summoned Tom. But I guess it will be known in the next chapter, which I am looking forward to reading. |
 FTW20142 2009-12-17 . chapter 25Brilliant writing, the plot, characterization, all so brilliant. This is one of the best written stories ever. Other stories (save a few) compared to this feels like rubbish that belongs in a $#!t pile. |
 welltossedsalad 2009-12-17 . chapter 25You have a favourite brand of beer? I'll send you all you want if this keeps up :) |
 MarinePotterfan 2009-12-17 . chapter 25Nice chapter, I can't wait to see how he gets out of this. Update soon.
Thanks for writing
MPF |
 The French Dark Lord 2009-12-17 . chapter 25Now that's taking the word pain to a whole new level! |
 hattuteline 2009-12-17 . chapter 5Yeah, yeah, I feel kind of stupid. I just checked your profile. :) |
 hattuteline 2009-12-17 . chapter 4I'm always a sucker for the time-travel stories, and the Groundhog variant of these is always a very interesting concept. I see you've managed to push the limits a bit. These gaps appear when Harry manipulates a certain period of time too much over the resets, I suppose, tearing the fabric of time itself. The demon and sword thingy kind of reminded me about the Hero trilogy, which was a very nice nod (if it was done on purpose). H/F is good, but I hope you don't make Fleur too 'easy' ... However, seeing your penchant for torturing Harry, there should be little to no problems with that. |
 Renzo7 2009-12-17 . chapter 25Great work, as always. Keep it up and please update soon. |
 Mordread 2009-12-17 . chapter 25ouch! *winces in mental pain* damn im suprised that harrys eyes havent popped after goin so much cruciatus's, poor ol' bella she must be well ** not to mention she must be lookin forward to another crucio by old voldie himself xD. lookin forward to the next chappie :) |
 smaginn 2009-12-17 . chapter 25Bella is very insane, isn't she? Somehow, I find it unrealistic that Harry did not break, it seems a little too "godlike" for me. But I did love the torture methods... :) |
 BurstAngel 2009-12-16 . chapter 25 Always a good read, the time between updates is long and your chapters somewhat short (for the length of time you take to update) but its ALWAYS a good read. |
 tatewaki2000 2009-12-16 . chapter 25how...simple. o.o |
 A-man 2009-12-16 . chapter 25 I was hoping for a fight...but this was decent. I think you should try and change up your writing style a bit. It is getting a bit repetitive. |