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| Kai Dragoon 2008-07-26 ch 29, | abuseAn acid bloodline female OC sure can have some interesting lines lol. |
| Kael Hyun 2008-07-24 ch 28, | abuseoh and About Sakura shes alwase subconsciously Loved Naruto I mean heck she was willing to give up Team 7's Chance to be Chunin just for his dream of being Hokage its in Shudupin that she realizes that she loves him and not Sasgay |
| Man-Slaying Shadow 2008-07-23 ch 27, | abuseJust a suggestion, maybe make Curse, Silence, and Ghost all undercover units. |
| Lady Silverhawk 2008-07-21 ch 29, | abuseAwesome story. Definitely interested in the Omega Project, just cuz it has an awesome name... ^-^ |
| OCQueen 2008-07-20 ch 29, | abuseOkay, love the Naren girl! People who write these stories with new bloodlines have to think about things like that. |
| Lady Silverhawk 2008-07-20 ch 4, | abuselol...but why is the rum gone??! lol. ^_^ |
| Deaths Aprentis 2008-07-20 ch 29, | abusekeep going! i wonder what hinata's father wanted with her... |
| Daysi5 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuselol, i love this story so far. hinata and naruto are really strong. |
| Royal Snaza 2008-07-18 ch 29, | abuseYeah, um... I dont think I ever said this but truly sincerely... Your story Kicks serious **! keep it up, and have Nuren kicking some more **, well drugging some more **... oh and I appreciate Jiraiya alot he like the ** ninja master! |
| dr3am3r06 2008-07-18 ch 29, | abusehey, I also miss Jiraiya and his funny acts! I'm soo curious about what's next in naruto manga. Have ya read that yet? go there: /Naruto/ vague... vague.. well, you're really unpredictable as Naruto :D >.< melting panty? lol :D keep doing! I love the way you update so fast (not like others do like me :)) ) ! I guess you got good creativity mind. Please update ^^ |
| UzumakiToba 2008-07-18 ch 29, | abuseNice chappy I reallylike the thing with Sakura you should drug her some more so ahe becomes an addict |
| markrock18 2008-07-17 ch 29, | abuseare the people of Konoha ever going to find out Naruto and Hinata's secret. and when will Hinata find out about the fox. |
| Ginriku 2008-07-17 ch 29, | abuseLol yur crazy with crazy ** characters and words its awesome! And Ya I gotta agree with you about Jiraiya J-man is da ** lol Update soon! |
| Voidangel Soren 2008-07-17 ch 29, | abuseI will remain steadfast. A grammar error somewhere I'm sure, but nothing really wrong on the whole. Nice job. Soren |
| Xeno Major 2008-07-17 ch 29, | abuseViva la Jack Sparrow! |