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wickedhpnerd
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
This was so cute! I love Chad's translation <3
CryingTearsOfBlood
2008-12-31 . chapter 1
cute
RomanGoddess4eva
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
Aww, cute fic!! I like it very, very much! Genius!
<3
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
I liked it.

Just lettin' you know.
wild wolf free17
2008-11-03 . chapter 1
Adorableness.
Estel Baggins
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
He he. Very very cute. I loved this.
WickedWillows
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
I love this! So cute!
firedragongirl
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
This was just awesome! I thought this was really cute. XDXDXDXD And I like how the phrase just pops up every time. I haven't watched... the movie that you stated, but it seems like something I wanna watch now. XDXD Please type more like this soon! ^.^
Seida-310
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
LOVED IT
Pirates Sparrow and Turner
2008-02-20 . chapter 1
LOL Sweet and cute! :-) We enjoyed it! :-)
Sandshrew777
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
I like what you're doing with the line "A little," as I've done the same thing recently in a Ryan/Chad friendship fic of mine (Revelations: Orientation, if you want to check it out!) with the line "Not quite right." I loved the idea, I loved the execution, and I loved the humorous implications.

If anything, I want more explanation for Chad's finding Ryan cute. Boys don't find other boys cute on a regular basis. He has to change somewhat in the narration, and you don't quite justify that enough for us. I know it's a short!one-shot, but I needed that little justification, to be sure, and preferably in a scene so that I can be shown Chad's change from canon (where he's still straight).

Otherwise, I loved this. A cute idea, nice narration, useful dialogue, and smart tone. You carry the comparison with the "A little" line with ease and a strong, logical viewpoint. A good exercise! :)

Excellent work.

Keep writing.
chrisvel
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
Liked it? A little :-)
So lovely and cute!
I hope watching HSM in english is going to inspire you to write more Scarred?
I-Kiss-The-Air
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
too cute! keep em coming.
PrettyPetalProductions
2008-02-12 . chapter 1
OMG that was awesome! I had to watch the princess bride in english for an assigment last year, and your right it is really great. Loved the kiss at the end(Y) you rock keep it up:D
lilsteves
2008-02-12 . chapter 1
I love the Princess Bride! It's so cool how you incorporated it into High School Musical. I don't think Disney would approve of it, but I sure do!
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