 wickedhpnerd 2009-08-14 . chapter 1This was so cute! I love Chad's translation <3 |
 CryingTearsOfBlood 2008-12-31 . chapter 1cute |
 RomanGoddess4eva 2008-11-24 . chapter 1Aww, cute fic!! I like it very, very much! Genius! |
 <3 2008-11-17 . chapter 1 I liked it.
Just lettin' you know. |
 wild wolf free17 2008-11-03 . chapter 1Adorableness. |
 Estel Baggins 2008-10-26 . chapter 1He he. Very very cute. I loved this. |
 WickedWillows 2008-07-17 . chapter 1I love this! So cute! |
 firedragongirl 2008-05-25 . chapter 1 This was just awesome! I thought this was really cute. XDXDXDXD And I like how the phrase just pops up every time. I haven't watched... the movie that you stated, but it seems like something I wanna watch now. XDXD Please type more like this soon! ^.^ |
 Seida-310 2008-03-23 . chapter 1LOVED IT |
 Pirates Sparrow and Turner 2008-02-20 . chapter 1LOL Sweet and cute! :-) We enjoyed it! :-) |
 Sandshrew777 2008-02-17 . chapter 1I like what you're doing with the line "A little," as I've done the same thing recently in a Ryan/Chad friendship fic of mine (Revelations: Orientation, if you want to check it out!) with the line "Not quite right." I loved the idea, I loved the execution, and I loved the humorous implications.
If anything, I want more explanation for Chad's finding Ryan cute. Boys don't find other boys cute on a regular basis. He has to change somewhat in the narration, and you don't quite justify that enough for us. I know it's a short!one-shot, but I needed that little justification, to be sure, and preferably in a scene so that I can be shown Chad's change from canon (where he's still straight).
Otherwise, I loved this. A cute idea, nice narration, useful dialogue, and smart tone. You carry the comparison with the "A little" line with ease and a strong, logical viewpoint. A good exercise! :)
Excellent work.
Keep writing. |
 chrisvel 2008-02-14 . chapter 1Liked it? A little :-)
So lovely and cute!
I hope watching HSM in english is going to inspire you to write more Scarred? |
 I-Kiss-The-Air 2008-02-13 . chapter 1too cute! keep em coming. |
 PrettyPetalProductions 2008-02-12 . chapter 1OMG that was awesome! I had to watch the princess bride in english for an assigment last year, and your right it is really great. Loved the kiss at the end(Y) you rock keep it up:D |
 lilsteves 2008-02-12 . chapter 1I love the Princess Bride! It's so cool how you incorporated it into High School Musical. I don't think Disney would approve of it, but I sure do! |