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Rebel Goddess
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abuseSo so so cute. I love the way Dean deals with Sam not knowing about hunting. Great little ficlet. The mustard Anasazi sign was especially funny.
historylover
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseB'lony me! Cute!

Love me the Wee!Chesters!

Kat
Trish62
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseThat was actually very cute. I haven't found much lately to make me smile, but windy-goes, well that's just too cute. And by all means, protect the bologna sandwiches. Cute!
supergirl3684
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abusevery very cute! :D
Kageka Necavi
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseThat is absolutely adorable. Do you spend time around children? Because you're able to write little kids really well. From little Sammy conning Dean into doing the bologna to all of his little misspeaks, it's very accurately done. And cute. The misspeaks especially.

In addition to being well done as far as just the general age range, you've, once again, nailed the characters. I can really picture little Sammy and little Dean in this kind of a situation (The ones in my mind look like the ones from the flashback in Something Wicked) and little Sammy with all his questions is just perfect.

Anyway, great little story. Made me giggle with the sheer amounts of cuteness packed into it.
PsychicWonderKitty
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseLoved it! 'B'loney', 'Minny-soda', 'windy-go'...LOL, Sammy's six-year-old speech is just too adorable for words! I can definitely see that scenario taking place, Sammy with all that irresistible wide-eyed innocence and curiosity while awesome big bro Dean keeps the innocence intact by deflecting the truth about the reality of monsters, aw and heehee! Great job, I really enjoy all your cute Wee!Chester stories! :-)
rozzy07
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseThis was a sheer delight to read from start to finish. I can just imagine Dean deflecting his little brother's over smart thoughts like that - as in not necessarily lying but keeping him as innocent as possible for as long as he could. So bravo for offering up such a lovely little story that made me smile on what had been one drudge of a day.
psiChic
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseAw! That was so sweet and cute! I loved it. :)
sylia91
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseSo cute! "B'loney me". I love weechester stories and this was a great one.
sammygirl1963
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseAww what a cute one-shot with Dean trying to keep Sammy innocent about the creatures out there for as long as possible. What an awesome scene you painted of the boys working together to make sandwiches for their trip!
Kateydid
2008-02-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was too stinkin' cute! I think I must've laughed or said "aw" at least a dozen times.
DreamBrother
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseAdorable :-)

Now I want a snadwich...
raputathebuta
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseVery cute! Oh Wee!Chesters...how I love you!
wild wolf free17
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseOh, the cuteness! It slays me.
irismay42
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseAww, cuteness abounds! Actually, I still think Sam would have worked out something was up with John's line of work before he made it to eight... This is lovely though, Dean simultaneously trying to protect Sam from the monsters while at the same time trying to protect him from the idea of monsters too...

Fabulous!
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