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Nox Wicked
2008-11-27 . chapter 7
cute chappie!

was a little short, and lack of Riku made me kinda sad, but it was still pretty sweet :3

looking forward to next update!
Sora Keyblader
2008-11-27 . chapter 7
AW, Axel and Roxas are falling in love!
this is so, cute! XD
THEendOFtheRAINBOW
2008-11-27 . chapter 7
Aw~ happy thanksgiving! this will probley be the only fun part of mine...any idea when the next chapter will be done?
THEendOFtheRAINBOW
2008-11-12 . chapter 6
i love this story, it's simply amizing, keep up the good work. :)

DA~ undead-fish
iluvtoady
2008-08-25 . chapter 6
"Aww."
Makes me wish Axel and Roxas would end up together.
Although I'm kind of biased.
AkuRoku is my numero uno.
Nox Wicked
2008-08-22 . chapter 6
not an akuroku fan, but this was cute. I enjoyed it.

...I love the sarcastic humor in here...I really do...

can't wait for the next update!
AngelsSubstance
2008-08-22 . chapter 6
YES NEW CHAP but no spiderman in it. I wonder wat happened to spiderman
lulzxchocolate
2008-06-22 . chapter 5
xDD
i lurvv this! it's hilarious!!
more please! :D
Nox Wicked
2008-06-11 . chapter 5
god, I love this story ><

'stay away from riku...'

I loved it >O

update soon PUHPUHPUHPLEASE...?
Roxas-Has-A-Stick
2008-06-11 . chapter 5
WE~! Update!

I still absolutely ADORE how you've portrayed Riku, though I think I disliked Roxas a little towards the end of this chapter due to how mean he is to Axel, poor fire-crotch!

Anywhoo, keep on writing, I am like holy crapola addicted to this storyline now!

~Roxas-Has-A-Stick
(and he knows cake when he sees it)
Roxas-Has-A-Stick
2008-05-01 . chapter 4
haha! that sounds just like me, almost everyday i have some form of painful story to tell, though where's MY spiderman? guess no one expects to find one of those in an all girls school... oh well.

call it a fetish, but i prefer stories where riku ISN'T the biggest jerk of the month (it happens a lot, letting darkness take control of ones self does not mean to say they are complete b*tches -i prefer censoring things myself, so that the '**' thing does won't appear and you know exactly what i was saying-), this means that i really enjoy your story.

though you can usually tell i like someone's story by how much i ramble in my reviews, unless i'm about to go somewhere or am tired, in which case i either state i am such or promise a proper review via PM later on.

~Roxas-Has-A-Stick
(and it's glad that IT doesn't have to have a chest cast...)
Nox Wicked
2008-04-23 . chapter 4
man...that cliffhanger...makes me sad D:

LOL at roxas' riku looking xD I LOVE IT.

UPDATE SOON. PLZ.
Sora Keyblader
2008-04-23 . chapter 4
Aw poor Riku!
slammed into his lovely blonde!! XD

He tries so hard to protect him and now THIS!! hahahah xD poor Roxy!
MelodiousSchemer
2008-03-17 . chapter 3
WOWS!

I'm totally loving it, I'm just left wanting more, more, more!

Poor Roxas, I feel so bad for him.

LOVES IT! I can't wait for the update. You rock! XD
iluvtoady
2008-03-17 . chapter 3
I love this story, it's so different.
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