 Nox Wicked 2008-11-27 . chapter 7cute chappie!
was a little short, and lack of Riku made me kinda sad, but it was still pretty sweet :3
looking forward to next update! |
 Sora Keyblader 2008-11-27 . chapter 7AW, Axel and Roxas are falling in love!
this is so, cute! XD |
 THEendOFtheRAINBOW 2008-11-27 . chapter 7Aw~ happy thanksgiving! this will probley be the only fun part of mine...any idea when the next chapter will be done? |
 THEendOFtheRAINBOW 2008-11-12 . chapter 6i love this story, it's simply amizing, keep up the good work. :)
DA~ undead-fish |
 iluvtoady 2008-08-25 . chapter 6"Aww."
Makes me wish Axel and Roxas would end up together.
Although I'm kind of biased.
AkuRoku is my numero uno. |
 Nox Wicked 2008-08-22 . chapter 6not an akuroku fan, but this was cute. I enjoyed it.
...I love the sarcastic humor in here...I really do...
can't wait for the next update! |
 AngelsSubstance 2008-08-22 . chapter 6YES NEW CHAP but no spiderman in it. I wonder wat happened to spiderman |
 lulzxchocolate 2008-06-22 . chapter 5xDD
i lurvv this! it's hilarious!!
more please! :D |
 Nox Wicked 2008-06-11 . chapter 5god, I love this story ><
'stay away from riku...'
I loved it >O
update soon PUHPUHPUHPLEASE...? |
 Roxas-Has-A-Stick 2008-06-11 . chapter 5WE~! Update!
I still absolutely ADORE how you've portrayed Riku, though I think I disliked Roxas a little towards the end of this chapter due to how mean he is to Axel, poor fire-crotch!
Anywhoo, keep on writing, I am like holy crapola addicted to this storyline now!
~Roxas-Has-A-Stick
(and he knows cake when he sees it) |
 Roxas-Has-A-Stick 2008-05-01 . chapter 4haha! that sounds just like me, almost everyday i have some form of painful story to tell, though where's MY spiderman? guess no one expects to find one of those in an all girls school... oh well.
call it a fetish, but i prefer stories where riku ISN'T the biggest jerk of the month (it happens a lot, letting darkness take control of ones self does not mean to say they are complete b*tches -i prefer censoring things myself, so that the '**' thing does won't appear and you know exactly what i was saying-), this means that i really enjoy your story.
though you can usually tell i like someone's story by how much i ramble in my reviews, unless i'm about to go somewhere or am tired, in which case i either state i am such or promise a proper review via PM later on.
~Roxas-Has-A-Stick
(and it's glad that IT doesn't have to have a chest cast...) |
 Nox Wicked 2008-04-23 . chapter 4man...that cliffhanger...makes me sad D:
LOL at roxas' riku looking xD I LOVE IT.
UPDATE SOON. PLZ. |
 Sora Keyblader 2008-04-23 . chapter 4Aw poor Riku!
slammed into his lovely blonde!! XD
He tries so hard to protect him and now THIS!! hahahah xD poor Roxy! |
 MelodiousSchemer 2008-03-17 . chapter 3WOWS!
I'm totally loving it, I'm just left wanting more, more, more!
Poor Roxas, I feel so bad for him.
LOVES IT! I can't wait for the update. You rock! XD |
 iluvtoady 2008-03-17 . chapter 3I love this story, it's so different. |